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Review of chapter "Calm Before the Storm" from starwolf
Review:
so far you have a solid story. Riley and Graham are smart and loyal. Forrest is an ass, an is talking treason. Walsh is a psycho. I look forward to seeing what you do with this. thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [15 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Calm Before the Storm" from alecpotter
Review:
Nice chapter and a good story. Hope you continue with it.
Review By [alecpotter] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Calm Before the Storm" from nightshadowlife
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love it!!!!! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Calm Before the Storm" from ClumsyElf
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Great story!! Hope to see more soon!!

SARAH
Review By [ClumsyElf] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Calm Before the Storm" from serenityselena
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it seems that some people just don`t get the meaning of the words "back off"... Riley and his group will probably need another demonstration and I hope they get one soon... *evil smirk*
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Calm Before the Storm" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Okay, first things first, Great Story I mean Really Great.
Second, wow, Forest, arrogant much? You just heard that this guy has more training and experience than you do and you are still calling him an amateur? on the other hand it does catch Forest's personality.
Third, frankly I would be expecting the Pentagon to be shutting the Initiative down real-soon-now after this little snafu. Maybe they will keep it for a bit but capturing a allied agent who is assigned? The President now knows about the Initiative? One of the things in the show was that the program was so black as to be deniable to both the Joint-Chiefs and the President. Well that just got blown away, so if something goes wrong it sits on Clinton's desk - he will not like that so he's going to shut them down fast.

Just some thoughts.

Great story, I will be tracking!
Comments from author:
There are none so blind as those who refuse to see. That's Forrest in a nutshell.

Clinton has other things to deal with, and mostly is just interested in smoothing things over, smacking down the guilty parties and not causing a foreign policy disaster. Mostly he'll just consider it a blip to be ignored until the report that the Initiative is destroyed winds up on his desk.

Thanks.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Calm Before the Storm" from Eureka
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Hmm thought I had left a review before...Don't see one though.
Pretty good story so far, will be watching this one. Harry and Buffy are a good dynamic, and Wills with a wand may be enough to stop her from going total dark..with just a small time of "Bored Now.." and Xander not getting so hurt as before. With Harry there Walsh shouldn't be able to go as far as she did before and if Graham and Forest think they can get one over on Harry I think they may have another thing coming cause they only were able to get one over on Buffy for so long and she doesn't have magic.
Comments from author:
Or it might make Willow's ensuing eruption even worse. In terms of raw power and potential, as Harry later admits, she's probably the strongest witch or wizard he's ever met.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Calm Before the Storm" from KingOfCretins
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Interesting story

I have two points to make however firstly is your timing is off, for BTVS the first story takes place near the beggining of S3 and for HP its between Books 5 & 6. For BTVS the second story takes place near the beggining of S4 and for HP its after Book 7, this means 2 years have passed for HP and only 1 year for BTVS.

The second point I have to make is I would expect Harry (even considering his accomplishments) would need some sort of additional training (lasting at least a year if not more) in order to become an official Auror.

These are minor points and do not detract from the story so feel free to ignore them and keep writing.
Comments from author:
I'm aware. The timeline problems are intentional, mostly because I wanted to slip Harry in post Angel and Pre Riley. He had some. Not much.

Thanks.
Review By [KingOfCretins] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interfering Government Agency, meet angry Slayer" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
Interesting chapter. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Good luck with your finals!

CT.
Comments from author:
Thanks :).
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interfering Government Agency, meet angry Slayer" from AnFan
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It's pretty basic so far, but I like it. The action is decent, and the interactions are pretty good. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [4 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interfering Government Agency, meet angry Slayer" from serenityselena
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things are heating up...
it`s clear that "someone" doesn`t know when to stop...
hopefully she`ll get what she deserves soon, and before she manages to cause too much damage...
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interfering Government Agency, meet angry Slayer" from AllenPitt
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Nicely done by HP. Appeal to higher layer of management, best way to do things. Much less messy. Now when Walsh goes (further) rogue they've someone to turn to. And, wow, apparating is a useful talent, especially as it doesn't require a wand.
It'll be interesting to see how Willow fares with some extra instruction & possibly a wand of her own. Maybe won't go off the rails this time...
I'm hoping to see HP meet Anya--- she's a living trove of historical info. She predates Nicholas Flamel and all that.
Comments from author:
Harry's less of a shoot first ask questions later bloke by this point.

I'm not too sure about that, though it may prevent the Magical addiction, dark willow is another thing entirely. Besides, I'm dying to type the words 'Bored Now.'

So she has. And met several famous wizards.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interfering Government Agency, meet angry Slayer" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Too bad Harry didn't use Legilimency on Walsh so he can stop her before she dies defying her orders. But on the plus side, she dies and doesn't have to worry about counting snowflakes.
Comments from author:
Harry isn't much of a legilimens, and it honestly hasn't occurred to him.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Narf
Review:
Kick ass please up date soon. Keep you the good work thanks and bye
Review By [Narf] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spk
Review:
Oh...I can't wait to see Harry put Riley in his place. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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