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Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from eriktheviking
Review:
An entertaining and intriguing view of Xander's future. I especially enjoyed his relationship with Marcie, well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from Geyer
Review:
Interesting story and well-written. Is it OK to hope that Xander manages to survive and eventually get back home? I like your Xander/cloneJack pairing, as I'm fond of both characters. I was really confused by the timeline, since it seemed like decades had passed since Sunnydale fell, but that the SGC timeline was in season 9. Finding your explanation in the answer to another review was very helpful; you might want to mention it when posting future stories in this series.
Comments from author:
Thanks! From this point, I consider all possibilities (that stay in-character and stick to the laws of magic of this verse) to be equally true. So there's a universe where Xander finds a loophole in the can't-come-back clause and comes back (because there's always a loophole somewhere), and there's a universe where the portal doesn't take him to a different reality, so it's absolutely okay to hope for him to come back. Unfortunately, I'm not going to write any of the universes where he does, but rest assured that they do exist. Sorry about the timeline confusion; I'll definitely include an explanation in other stories in the series.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [20 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from Sanchan
Review:
Wahnsinn!!!
*Sorry I just cannot find an English word that contains the emotion that "Wahnsinn" includes for me*
This is great, totally great.
I didn't get all the references, because I don't know all the fandoms you took them from, but it was still understandable and great!
I hope you write a sequel to this!

Bye
Sanchan
Review By [Sanchan] • Date [27 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from heyu
Review:
I really liked this story. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it! I'm planning to write at least one sequel.
Review By [heyu] • Date [1 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from Neverwillmini
Review:
Lots of potential for side stories, history, and new dimension stories here. I hope you'll treat us to further tales in this Xander's/'verse's storyline.
Comments from author:
I have lots more planned out! Hopefully I'll be able to write some of them.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [24 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Potent, beautiful story. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from SlowMercury
Review:
This is very well done. The "saucy" joke was hilarious, especially how it and all the other tricks backfired on Xander. I always enjoy hearing about what the class of Sunnydale '99 is up to, and I really loved Xander and Marcie's friendship. I'm a bit unsure how far into the future this was since I think mini-Jack was only 21, but I liked how everyone got old and griped about it; and how "only rockstars die from stress." And Xander being paranoid about his relationship because he wants it to last. :( The end was unexpected and sad.At least Jack will probably be able to handle SWCI.

I hope Marcie does get her apprentice, and I'd actually love to see her run into the Leverage team. Usually, Marcie's not a character I'm too interested in, but you did a really good job on her.

Am I right in guessing that Willow died in Brazil in a potentially multuniverse extinction level event?

I really enjoyed this fic, thank you for sharing. If there's anymore set in this universe, I'd love to read it some day.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it! This verse has had some "behind the scenes" details changed to make the various fandoms fit together better (I swear! All of the changes have reasons, they're not just for my own amusement!), but I couldn't explain everything fully in this fic without infodumping horribly. This 'verse runs partly on the magical rules of the Dresden Files, and the Sunnydalers are magical enough to age like Dresden Files wizards; it's ~300 years in BtVS's future. Jack 2.0 is as young as he is because I've set Stargate considerably later in the timeline; General O'Neill's moving to the Pentagon at about the same time as In Fine Viae. Xander has very good reason to be paranoid about his relationship; if anybody else had gone through as much dating trauma as he has by this point, they probably would have given up on dating at all. Jack's going to be awesome at running SWCI eventually, but first he has to get past the issues that come about when one person has been in charge for a very long time and then dies unexpectedly.

I'm glad you liked my Marcie; I initially planned a much smaller role for her, but she kind of wrote herself. I don't have much of an idea what happens to her later on, though.

Actually, the Brazil Incident didn't involve Willow, but a student of hers who went off the rails in a completely novel way. But Willow did die...badly. :( Pretty much everything horrific that could happen, did happen in this verse, short of outright apocalypse.

Hopefully I'll eventually be able to finish some of the other fics I have set in this verse!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from HebiR
Review:
That was bleeping incredible.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from Tee
Review:
Really well done. I am assuming there is more to come based on other comments in reviews and I'm looking forward to them.
Review By [Tee] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from (Past Donor)wozwashi
Review:
That was great, very touching, and xanderish.
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from cannonfly
Review:
Oh wow. Xander is The Man! He goes out, not with a CRASH! BANG! BOOM!, but with a sigh and a save. Loved it!
Review By [cannonfly] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
did you put this up somewhere then take it down and put it back up?

cause i'm like pretty damn sure i read it and reviewed but it might have been on a different cite.

anyways i loved it

great story
Comments from author:
I posted In Fine Viae on AO3 and fanfiction.net on March 28, but took a while to post it here because to me it doesn't really feel like enough of a crossover to qualify as one (maybe that's just me?).

I'm glad you liked it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from WingL
Review:
Very nicely done. I look foward to more of your stories when ready. Thank you for writing this.
Review By [WingL] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
As final acts go, that was remarkable.

I find myself hoping he is strong and readied for whatever he finds on the other side, and feel very sorry for Dawn's kid.

As it happens, I was listening to the closing music to Parasite Eve: The 3rd Birthday as I read this one.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

If anything, Xander is over-prepared for what he finds on the other side. The most tragic thing about Dawn's son is that he's not doing anything deliberately, but the world will end if he's not stopped.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Fine Viae" from cathyoden
Review:
Just....WOW! Thank you for sharing a great story.
Review By [cathyoden] • Date [21 Apr 12] • Not Rated
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