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Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Morgomir
Review:
Also a great story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
I 've never been fond of Auel, but at least all the discoveries here are not made by one person. That makes it a lot more palatable. A pity the Joyce cognate had to die. (Both sides had a point in the debate, though her temper always seems to get the better of her.) Lone Hunter seems to exhibit some incipient male superiority complex. (Who is he?)

And I assume that Dark is Faith and not Kendra? Wasn't qauite sure...

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Lone Hunter was based loosely on Riley, I'm not sure I got him quite right but there you go.

Dark = Faith, this was based on an early version of Faith who had issues and a rotten home life/background.

Joyce dying? Well she couldn't die of abrain tumour so it had to be lions!. And Joyce did on occasion have flashes of anger...after all she was only human!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [17 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from (Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Excellent story. Very well done.

Would be interesting to see what life would bring the clan in any sequels (there are certainly plenty of candidates for more cross-overs; Ice Age, 10,000 BC).
Comments from author:
Possible xovers in mind are indeed 'Ice Age' and the first ever Dr Who story 'An Unearthly Child'. I looked at 10,000BC and didn't like it I'm sorry to say.

It'll be a while before I do anything else in this reality as I've other things on the go.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Cordyfan
Review:
A demon mammoth? That was an unexpected ending to a very entertaining and original series! Just one question... What did Shine ask Buffy at the end of the previous chapter?

Thanks for writing this - I'm looking forward to your next creation.
Comments from author:
Hey look, that's between Slayers! No, I expect Shine asked if she should be Mother of the Clan.

Thanks for all your reviews.

Next story up...well, I think it'll be something a little more up to date!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from PATM
Review:
Once again I am darned disappointed it's over! But that demon mammoth was the reason all mammoths disappeared? Immaculate conception right?
Comments from author:
Hadn't thought of that! Could be...

Thanks for reading,

D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Dragonelf
Review:
You have done an excellent job with this story.

# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Comments from author:
Thank-you kindly,
D.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from MarcusRowland
Review:
OK, Dark told them how to make the slings, so what Did Buffy tell them? How sex works?
Comments from author:
Oh I think they knew that already...Dark also introduced 'kissing' too if you remember.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Amberdrake
Review:
Tease. you can't just introduce demon mammoths and then stop. That's just evil. :D
Comments from author:
You can if you're desperate for a way to end the story! Also as there might be an Ice Age xover some time in the future it should all fit together in the end.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Likiglok
Review:
Great story, my only complaint is I wanna know what Shine asked of Buffy. Even that isn't much of a complaint really :p
Comments from author:
I make a point to not listening in on Slayers conversations; Shine probably asked if she should take the Job as Mother of the Clan.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Likiglok] • Date [9 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Mcspender
Review:
Yay, demon elephants...I wonder if they're nastier than a moose, I mean, moose can be very nasty =S!!!!!.
And on to the sequel, thank you for such a cool alternate take of the Sunnydale gang, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Well, Mammoth really an early version of the thing the Slayers met in Redcar several thousand years later maybe?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [9 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Hecatonchires
Review:
Shine is so earnest. It turned the end bittersweet ;_;
Comments from author:
Yes earnest also she has a simpler world view than we do now.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [8 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Dragonelf
Review:
As usual you have done a very good job with the new chapters.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Comments from author:
Last one coming up.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [8 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from SariLane
Review:
Sad chapter. Good. but sad. and thanks for responding to my review... post partum depression is a real beyotch.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

You took the trouble to review, its only right that I take the time to reply.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [7 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from PATM
Review:
I LIKE it!
Comments from author:
Thank-you!

D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [7 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Mcspender
Review:
So, instead of finding the first slayer, Buffy found Shine?. Is Buffy a reincarnated Shine??.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
I'm 100% sure of that and I wrote the story. The answer is lost in the mists of time!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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