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Review of chapter "Meeting Uncle Bobby" from latina
Review:
This is a very interesting storyline. I cannot wait to read more and see how Bobby reacts to having a niece that will be living with him from now on. Also, there is the whole 'I know about demons' thing that will be addressed at some point. I would like to know what is going to happen to Jack and Fido if Bobby does the same tests as he did to Dean.

Also, is there a possibility that Fido will know that Dean just came back from Hell?

Continue with your writing. I have a feeling you will surprise many of us with this story.

~latina
Review By [latina] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting Uncle Bobby" from msdarque
Review:
Interesting story, I liked it.
Hope there's more soon.
Wonder how Bobby takes the news?
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting Uncle Bobby" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
i've seen this a few times on ff.net and the summary kinda pushed me away but i thought what the hell i'll give a shot and i actually like it.

you might want to change the summary a bit. mention that there is mystical demon induced reason for Xander being thought of as a boy when he's always been a she.

can't wait to read the next installment.
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting Uncle Bobby" from bex
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I 'm really enjoying you're unique approach to Genderbend fic, Xander is hilarious and I absolutely adore Fido and Jack. Also Dean and Bobby's interaction was spot on.
Review By [bex] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting Uncle Bobby" from VillageOrchid
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The corporality of parts of Xander's mind-laced-with-other-spirits is an interesting story problem that I hope you'll explore more. I have only seen a few episodes of SN, finding early first season episodes poorly conceived, in my opinion and then not tuning in much after that. However, I apparently know enough to follow along. Thanks for sharing and giving out enough details to be able to tell where in what timelines we are.

A little freudian slip or typo here:

Why did you need everyone to think I’m a girl?

I think you meant, boy?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Your "what if" is very complex, and your internal rambling is an interesting POV of genuine.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting Uncle Bobby" from (Past Donor)HiltonK
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Wasn't sure about the first chapter but the second's really shaping up nicely.
Looking forward to next installment :)
Review By [(Past Donor)HiltonK] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Jesse, not Jessie.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Not Rated
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