Review of chapter "Meeting Uncle Bobby" from latina
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This is a very interesting storyline. I cannot wait to read more and see how Bobby reacts to having a niece that will be living with him from now on. Also, there is the whole 'I know about demons' thing that will be addressed at some point. I would like to know what is going to happen to Jack and Fido if Bobby does the same tests as he did to Dean.
Also, is there a possibility that Fido will know that Dean just came back from Hell?
Continue with your writing. I have a feeling you will surprise many of us with this story.
~latina
Review By [latina] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting Uncle Bobby" from msdarque
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Interesting story, I liked it. Hope there's more soon. Wonder how Bobby takes the news? Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting Uncle Bobby" from pinkhairedharry
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i've seen this a few times on ff.net and the summary kinda pushed me away but i thought what the hell i'll give a shot and i actually like it.
you might want to change the summary a bit. mention that there is mystical demon induced reason for Xander being thought of as a boy when he's always been a she.
I 'm really enjoying you're unique approach to Genderbend fic, Xander is hilarious and I absolutely adore Fido and Jack. Also Dean and Bobby's interaction was spot on.
Review By [bex] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting Uncle Bobby" from VillageOrchid
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The corporality of parts of Xander's mind-laced-with-other-spirits is an interesting story problem that I hope you'll explore more. I have only seen a few episodes of SN, finding early first season episodes poorly conceived, in my opinion and then not tuning in much after that. However, I apparently know enough to follow along. Thanks for sharing and giving out enough details to be able to tell where in what timelines we are.
A little freudian slip or typo here:
Why did you need everyone to think I’m a girl?
I think you meant, boy?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Apr 12] • Not Rated