this was a magnificent story! thank you so much for it. *hands you scones* i could stand to see more of this too.

fun all the way through.

Awesome story! I hope you write some more in this universe...

I like both of these characters and this is a good start for a story. Thanks for sharing. I hope you take the following comments in the spirit they are offered.

I do not normally like to criticize but because I like the plot and characters you are developing, I would highly suggest you get a good beta to work with you on sentence structure, punctuation and basic writing rules. You have a good imagination but could use help with technical skills.

I really hate to criticize because I am grateful authors are willing to share their work so generously. You show a great deal of promise and it is frustrating that the technical aspects of writing are getting in the way of really enjoying your work.

Love this.

Love the idea of them meeting when on a job-very organic. Not sure about the family part at the end, seems more towards the dating end then family. (Not that one precludes the other the way you wrote it.) Very enjoyable!

This was really cute

Nicely done. I love the character interaction. I want more darn it! College shenanigans, Xan and Wills in the Leverage mix. More sticking it to Sterling etc.

And then more came, and it was good.

Fun premise, fun execution, happy ending. With Dawn, Xander & Willow at hand, I'm pretty sure Nate can steal the world now.

Thanks for the unexpected boost to my Sunday afternoon. You did a great job!

Fastest poster in the West! I get to the end, there's another one. That was awesome.

I really like this premise. I like the friendship between Dawn and Eliot, and especially how it began. I can see that happening in that exact manner very easily.

Great fun, looking forward to more. Thanks!