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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DieselDriver
Review:
Darn. It's a good thing I take a lot of antihistamines...

Not fair and Not Right! Lt. Wetterings should not have had to revert to Senior Airman. BA HUMBUG!!!

"Sigh... the off monster. I hate that word..."

LOL, to quote Top Gear... "how hard can it be?"
Comments from author:
Isn't it just?

The US Armed forces are not very generous with making brevet appointments permanent outside of major wars. But she'll get there eventually.

Harder than you might think.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [26 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SilverWave
Review:
Great post.

Cheers!
Comments from author:
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Review By [SilverWave] • Date [30 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from unicornzvi
Review:
Nice story, although you should add it to the recommended reading order on the series page. Trying to read chapter 72 of "Lonely Souls" was confusing until I realized I was missing a story.

I liked the character reactions here but I hope you will have them implement some rational quarantine precautions for the gate, or at least ignore all the many cases the lack of even the most basic precautions screwed up the SGC.
Comments from author:
Drat, I forgot about that, one of many things I need to change. And I stll need to publish the list of characters...

There will be changes implemented, but some will take more time than others. I really can' t think of rational explanations for half of the things that happened in Stargate SG-1 Language, disease, culture shock etc, all these things should have stopped the exploration about 98% of the time...

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Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlazeVein
Review:
Great short story. I am a fan of Arlene/Jack all along the ride , and I love to see those 2 together, and oh why not a sibling for Evy to worry about? heh ;P
Comments from author:
Thank you. This might not have been the best way to get a relationship started again. Only one? How conservative...
;-)

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Review By [BlazeVein] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story.

I would have been easy to have Jack go in and clear things up, but it would have felt wrong. They need more time before they can talk about this.
Comments from author:
Yes, Jack needs time and so does Arlene. We shall see where it ends.

Thanks for reading and reviewing
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Rather revealing of emotions! I enjoyed reading it, learning more about Arlene.
Comments from author:
This sort of encounter is bound to be revealing. The way such things get downplayed in the series and other series always seemed unrealistic to me. Glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [12 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Excellent story. Interested in seeing the back story as to how Kowalski survived, as in SG1 canon, he dies after being taken as a Goa'uld host right after the pilot episode, Children of the Gods (he died in the next episode after in canon, which is the official first episode).
Comments from author:
IT is really quite difficult to write how people react to his survival sicne they do not know he should have died. ;-) The Enemy within showed a great deal, but too little of the impact for my taste.

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Review By [(Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Dang. If you wanted to be really evil, you could have Arlene get pregnant out if this.

James
Comments from author:
Evil? Moi?

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Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Totally awesome story.

James
Comments from author:
Thank you. It was fun to write too.

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Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Seeing Kowalski in there threw me a little, but when I went back to "Children of a Greater God", I'm guessing Carol's air support kept the Jaffa far enough from the gate, the primta didn't infect him?

I know the whole command decision to make her 2IC during the Touched outbreak might look like favoritism, but they didn't really have time to look for anyone higher ranking who might also be immune. Hammond knew he was most likely infected, didn't know how much time he would have to prep someone to take over, and had two people who were apparently unaffected right in front of him.

Having solo quarters? Yeah, it sounds great...until you find out it's not safe for her to leave base. I imagine it'll also make it a bit difficult for whoever Adam contacts about teaching her.

Edit: Now that I think about it, though, Sr. Airman was about when they started encouraging to move out of the single airman housing, either off base or applying for base housing to make room for newer airmen.
Comments from author:
It's rather difficult to write a negative, but yes, that is what happened. He survived and will for a while yet.

Exactly Hammond's reasoning. Most others will realize this once their reational minds take over. YEs, Carol has definite downsides to her life...

Carol was looking for a place to live when the Marigold people tried to kidnap her.

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Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from joshlamont
Review:
Man... you really don't play softball, do you?
Comments from author:
I was always very bad at softball... But things will get better. One day. Maybe...

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Review By [joshlamont] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from FireWolfe
Review:
I really like this story. Love the reactions of the various characters. I can see the general as being a protective and loving father. I do hope there is more soon. It be fun to see Carol matched with someone from the highlander universe. Richie strikes me as a really good choice. I would love for him to be saved. The other option would be pretender and maybe pair her with Ethan. Anyway lovely update as always.
Fire
Comments from author:
Thank you. I rather like Hammond, it probably shows. I'm not quie certain yet with whom I 'll match Carol, these things tend to grow in my mind. I wasn't actually planning to have Jack and Arlene do the nasty. That just happened.

But Ethan? I think not...

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Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from shazamfan
Review:
Great chapter. More than I had been hoping for in the drama of dealing with events of the infection. Some serious 'healing' chapters ahead that is for sure and it looks as if Carter is off Jack's radar now in ways that was so fun and so hard to watch on the show. I hope you can find a better match for Sam than the piss poor efforts the show made. Girl needs a special guy or hey even gal in her life. I vote some alien..but thinking about it having her fall for some guy heavy in the world of magic would be funny as hell to watch them argue over magic and science. His family shocked at him falling for a Muggle or something.

The stern talking to for Evy was a great touch. Now I look forward to seeing who you have at her school to become friends with.

And lastly poor, poor Carol. I really feel for this women and think this tale will be a blast to read outside of Evy and her mom's tale seeing how her life shapes up.

-J-
Comments from author:
Thank you. I always felt that after this sort of episode is not given nearly enough attention to the results of the things that happen. THe Naked Now deals with it by Picard's statement 'it did not happen'.

I have notions about Sam's love life I hope you will like.

Carol will receive attention, never you fear.

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Review By [shazamfan] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Arlene was stripping of her blouse


**off**

Interesting. I was thinking of this story as boring but necessary background for the main plotline. Reading the other reviews I find there was a lot I missed. When did we find out that Airman C is an immortal ?
Comments from author:
Sigh... the off monster. I hate that word...

Carol's immortality is revealed in Children of a Greater god. She wakes up in a charnel pit and Adam Pierson/Methos senses her when Marigold try to grab her and thinks about getting her a mentor.


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Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Meneldur
Review:
Aw. This was... kinda sad while encouraging. It's good to see Arlene and Evy are dealing, with lots of help from family. And Jack will have his with Jon. But Carol was really sad. Hopefully she'll realize that some people, like Arlene, Jack, Sam, Daniel and Janet are willing to be her friends despite what problems she imagines or are real.
Comments from author:
I was hoping to get that reaction, so I'm rather glad. Evy still needs a lot of help and Arlene needs to deal with her guilt. Carol's life hopefully will get better from here on out.


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Review By [Meneldur] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
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