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Review of chapter "On Explanations, Assignments, and Departures" from ChefJackButler
Review:
This was an enjoyable story, and you're right, the fight scene you blocked out was great. I'm not sure about some of the characterization, but that's what makes horse races. Well done!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for your compliment on the fight scene. One of my favorite things is blocking out actions and movements; had you walked by my cubicle at work while I was writing this, you might have seen me doing some of them. Instead of working.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [23 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On Movie Night, One Week Later" from starwolf
Review:
well thanks for the great story. it definitely had its ups and downs. I can't say that the VI in this was my favorite character (she kind of had her head partly up her ass the whole time. If she loved him she should have fought for him not with everyone else) but that my opinion. its been a heck of a ride.
thanks again.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On the Coming of the Shadow Demon" from starwolf
Review:
"I hope that you don't think the "emergency portal" was too much of a cop-out. I freely admit that I got the idea from Star Trek: Nemesis."

I thought it made perfect sense. of corse Data could have just as easily grabbed two.
really good chapter, thanks
Comments from author:
Well, in Nemesis, there was only the prototype.

Of course, Star Trek 11 and 12 have established that one can easily beam from Earth to Qo'nos (Klingon homeworld), so it's not like emergency transporters matter anymore anyway.

Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On Saturday Night, Which Is All Right For..." from starwolf
Review:
very good story so far, but doesn't Michelle hence Dawn have green eyes?
well on to the next chapter, thanks
Comments from author:
You're probably right. Plus, Buffy's eyes are green/hazel, so it would make sense that her sister's eyes would be along that spectrum. I guess for some reason -- maybe conflated through fanfic -- I thought Dawn's eyes were blue.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On Battles in Libraries and Battles in Dreams" from lunalurker
Review:
I don't have words right now for how... evil this has become. This last chapter.. I don't think I can finish this one. Which is a compliment to your writing ability, of course, but this trods too hard on buttons.
Thanks for writing though.
Comments from author:
I'm glad the story was effecting, but I'm sorry to hear that you couldn't make it through whatever chapter got you stuck.

If you want to email me through my profile page, I can bridge you through it to the next chapter.

For something substantially less intense, you might try "Dreaming of How It Was Going to Be".
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On Movie Night, One Week Later" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
brilliant series and if I had any recommends left, I absolutely would.

As for the ethics of dating two slayers at once, as long as everyone knows and consents, its a blessing. Its when its all secretive, behind the back that its crap... Besides, Chris wasn't seeing Faith on theside. Vi had no reason to be angry at them. At Nancy... yes. anyhow, my thoughts on the topic for what it is worth...

thank you for the great story.
Comments from author:
Thanks; I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Next entry in this universe drops 7/30.

I think the problem people had with Chris was that he was both Vi's and Faith's psychiatrist at one point.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On Movie Night, One Week Later" from DofEire
Review:
Very very satisfying. The turtle cheesecake of fanfic. ;)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I wish I could eat turtle cheesecake, but it upsets my stomach. Anything with caramel, anything that's that rich... oh well.

I appreciate your continued support (and reviews).
Review By [DofEire] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On Movie Night, One Week Later" from Orion
Review:
Great! I really liked this, and look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. The next one in this series is scheduled to drop on July 30, so you won't have long to wait.

Thanks for your continued support and review-age.
Review By [Orion] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On Movie Night, One Week Later" from tealruby
Review:
Another very nice story in the series. Here's hoping you will continue it; your choices of characters from other shows/movies have been inspired. Love to see Chef got a new gig :)
Comments from author:
My goal with crossovers is to do things people haven't done, or to do them in new ways. The next story in the series (not chronologically, but the next to be posted) is from a fandom that isn't even on the main list. And yeah, Chef just showed up as I was writing; he totally wasn't planned.

Thanks for your continued support (and reviews).
Review By [tealruby] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On Movie Night, One Week Later" from BrownFinderth
Review:
'Twas one great story and am pretty glad the way it turned out by the author!!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and that the ending was good for you.

Thanks for your continued support (and reviews).
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On Movie Night, One Week Later" from Tempi
Review:
Great story and a very entertaining read. If you decide to write a sequel or follow-up, then I would love to discover what Vi or Anita is up to next.
Comments from author:
Thanks; I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

There are several follow-ups coming over the next four months, but neither Anita nor Vi are in them yet. I do have a sort-of side story for Vi but I haven't written it yet -- it'd be a crossover with The IT Crowd.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On Fears, Faith, and Friendship" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Some inward reflecting for Buffy and lots of spot appearances by other characters!! This chapter is much appreciated!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks; I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you like the grand finale, which is coming on Monday.

Thanks for your continued support and reviews.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On Fears, Faith, and Friendship" from Orion
Review:
Great! Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Orion] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On Explanations, Assignments, and Departures" from Eureka
Review:
Would be funny if they did a temp binding on Nancy and the Coven managed to work with her like they did Willow. But yeah Nancy needs to be magic free for a time at least.
Comments from author:
Honestly, what bothers me about a lot of fanfic is that the Coven is used as a catchall "magic boost" for pretty much everyone. I have almost no desire whatsoever to visit them in the Onverse. That said, I have thought about returning to Nancy at some point in the future. Not quite sure WHEN, since the next several stories are basically done (the longest tops out at 8000 words, I think), but it's on my mind.

Thanks for your continued support (and reviews).
Review By [Eureka] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On Explanations, Assignments, and Departures" from Kremer
Review:
So Faith and Willow are getting better, and Sarah's being modest.

Didn't figure Vi to be a coward and run away, though.
Comments from author:
I don't think Vi is being a coward, per se. I think she just wants to get away from everything for a while. Plus -- and I admit this -- it's kind of lazy writing that I didn't assign too much motivation to her other than "I need to get her off the main stage so that, when I write more stories in this universe, I don't have to worry about the interpersonal conflicts the C/F relationship can cause".

Thanks for your review.
Review By [Kremer] • Date [10 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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