It's a good start. There's not enough story line yet to say much else, but over all a good start. I'm glad that your spelling is good. :) Some of the explanatory details were a bit redundant (i.e ."Once the dust settled the rider turned off the engine and reached up to take off their helmet that was on their head." "Once the dust settled the rider turned off the engine and removed their helmet," would have been more efficient). Just small redundancies really, barely noticeable, but I thought to mention it as a small critique. A certain efficiency is usually appreciated when first describing the scene to lead into the story. Sometimes the reader just want to get on to the juicy/exciting parts. ;) Can't wait to read more. Hope you update soon!

A well written insertion of Buffy into the beginning of the crossover.

Whoa, this could be good. :)

I love the movie Legion. So I'm excited about your story. I hope you update soon. I will only nitpick one thing. It's diner, not dinner. Sorry, I'm not trying to be rude. Again, please update soon. I hope this is a Buffy/Michael pairing... with a happy ending.

thanks for letting me know! I sometimes write to fast and don't catch some of my mistakes so thanks for that!

very interesting start. more please

A promising start. Looking forward to seeing more of this.