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Review of chapter "Mos Eisley" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Aaahh! I liked Athena! You gotta get her bqck, boss! You just gotta! Maybe stashed somewhere by the Emp or something?!?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mos Eisley" from proofreader
Review:
Xander is exactly the type of guy to take advantage of my favorite missed opportunity in the star wars series: On the Death Star R2 is told to plug in because he should be able to access the ENTIRE IMPERIAL NETWORK. The possibilities of mayhem or "aquisition from enemy supplies" are endless. Done right, anything from self destructs being activated at random times on random ships to fake arrest/eliminate orders of "rebel spies", to orders for experimental super ships and/or fighters being dropped off unmanned for pickup in out of the way places by "covert agents". Might be a way to find/recover the Flame of Athena, too. With a full cargo of upgrades that can be installed included, of course.
Comments from author:
First thanks for reading. Second You've given me a great idea which I'll definitely use.
Review By [proofreader] • Date [11 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One twin found one twin lost." from CageFire
Review:
Hmm, I rather like this series so far. I'll be looking forward to more. Even though it's rather short, but oh well.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm gonna work on getting the chapters up to a better length.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [8 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An old man and two warriors." from Narf
Review:
Nice update keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Narf] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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