Review of chapter "Prologue" from
VillageOrchidReview:
The other twisty thing about Angel agreeing that Cordy could be helped by "any and all means" by WRH in their facility should have been a deal breaker. But considering the context, Angel was a big enough bonehead or regular guy to start out with to have missed that point.
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VillageOrchid] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
GreywizardReview:
Interesting. I can see this going a number of different ways, and most of them end up with Cordy eventually pimp-slapping Angel like the whiny bitch he is, in the hope of eventually beating some sense into him.
Although, I do think that last goal is completely futile.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate it. I dont know when new chapters will be posted since I wrote this to try and clear a bout of writers block. But someone will be telling Angel what an idiot he is.
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Greywizard] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated
