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Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
From your response to Greywizard: "But someone will be telling Angel what an idiot he is."

Good. I wanna be there to watch. ;)

I'm tempted to say "Leave her with Xander", but unfortunately, honesty compels me to say that neither he nor the Scoobies probably have the wherewithal to care for her right now (considering this ends probably shortly after the collapse of Sunnydale.) So who to leave her with in the Buffy-verse to watch over her while she recovers is kind of a thorny issue...

Hey: have Whistler bring back Doyle and get Dennis from Cordy's apartment. You know that both of them will have a vested interest in taking care of and protecting her.
Comments from author:
While getting Doyle and Dennis back to help out our favourite seer is a good idea they won't be making an appearance. I have the next chapter roughly plotted out in my head but having problems putting it onto paper. Thanks for the review and I'm looking forward to your stories, they're always great fun to read! Olebear.
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [13 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from VillageOrchid
The other twisty thing about Angel agreeing that Cordy could be helped by "any and all means" by WRH in their facility should have been a deal breaker. But considering the context, Angel was a big enough bonehead or regular guy to start out with to have missed that point.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Greywizard
Interesting. I can see this going a number of different ways, and most of them end up with Cordy eventually pimp-slapping Angel like the whiny bitch he is, in the hope of eventually beating some sense into him.

Although, I do think that last goal is completely futile.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate it. I dont know when new chapters will be posted since I wrote this to try and clear a bout of writers block. But someone will be telling Angel what an idiot he is.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated
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