Review of chapter "Prologue" from VillageOrchid
The other twisty thing about Angel agreeing that Cordy could be helped by "any and all means" by WRH in their facility should have been a deal breaker. But considering the context, Angel was a big enough bonehead or regular guy to start out with to have missed that point.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Greywizard
Interesting. I can see this going a number of different ways, and most of them end up with Cordy eventually pimp-slapping Angel like the whiny bitch he is, in the hope of eventually beating some sense into him.
Although, I do think that last goal is completely futile.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate it. I dont know when new chapters will be posted since I wrote this to try and clear a bout of writers block. But someone will be telling Angel what an idiot he is.
Review By [Greywizard
] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated