Great chapter!

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it

red

what a lovely update! I can't wait to see Dumblehole get screwed by Harry and the Scooby crew

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Red

I'm glad for Eliose to now be able to confide in Harry, but poor Harry being possibly blood linked to Dumblecrustcrackbastard yick. I think I'd rather bathe in acid than be related to him. LOL two Veela that will be a handful. Hey, maybe Faith, Cordy, Dawn, and a few others will feel like slaying Dumblecrack it would be really funny for a couple of "girls" to take him down lol, irony is beautiful!

Thanks for the review, and there is a reason for the blood adoption, don't worry! *GRIN* I've already decided who is going to get the pleasure of taking Albus down, I just hope you enjoy it when it gets here.

red

Another good chapter... and it's interesting about Eloise... I hope she can get her revenge on Dumbledork through Harry... And I wonder what Dumbledork has planned against the Harris clan in his bid for control over Harry.... More Please soon... Also, its nice that you have your computer working again....

Thanks, I'm glad you like my insight into Eloise's background. Don't worry, she has a lot more to do in this story before the end. As for what Albus has planned, heh heh heh *GRIN*

And, while I appreciate your thoughts about my computer, this is actually a replacement computer, the original was completely fried. Fortunately, I had the chapters of this story saved in my dropbox, unfortunately, I lost most of Twenty One Nights of Paradise, so I'm trying to reconstruct the story from memory.

Red

Great chapter!
More questions about just how "light" Albus actually is...in this AU sounds like not at all.

Thanks, and I'd say you were right about that *GRIN*

Wonderful chapter as always!
I must say I'm so glad I'm not the only one. From the minute I saw the first movie (yep saw the movie before reading any of the books, and sadly I still haven't seen all the movies or read all the books) my first thought was Dumblebuttcrack was a lecherous old perv. He always seemed more like spoiled candy enticing to look at but, guaranteed to make you seriously sick if ingested.

Love the background Scooby investigation!

Thanks for the review. As I've mentioned multiple times, I'm trying to do something different with Dumbledore in this story, and from reviews like yours, it seems like I'm succeeding *GRIN*

Yeah, the investigation is progressing, and who knows what they will uncover?

red

Ah Rupert and Jenny going "under the covers" at Eloise's that makes sense.
Plus the bit with the Parkinson's that fits and makes some sense - boy your Dumbledore is a sick f*ck, but we knew that.
Great chapter!

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

red

What the hell happened to your structure here? This chapter is so badly structured its unreadable! Did the site garble it or something?

I'm not really sure what happened, but it's fixed now.

red

I'm not normally a huge Percy fan, but I like the fact that he's determined to help undo the damage Dumblebutthead has caused. Nice update.

Yeah, Percy doesn't get a lot of screen time, but he does have a role to play in this story. Thanks for your review

red

Wow you had Peter kill himself, I didn't see that coming.
Interesting idea, Remus as DADA Professor and Harry as his assistant...the bribes from Dumbledore to Harry keep coming.
Gabriel as another member of Harry's family good!

Great chapter!

Thanks, I felt that Peter's decision was appropriate, given his realization of what he had done while writing the letter, I'm glad I was able to surprise you.

Red

5. Chapter Five

nice idea with the bond...that should help with Hermy's worries

6. Chapter Six

Fudge and the toad dead....nice....as well of the Shit Eaters

Thanks, glad you are enjoying the story

red

I love this story and the more I read the more I hate Dumbleprick. Such a lovely way to end a trying day thank you!

Thanks, I'm doing my job then! And don't worry, I think/hope you'll find Albus' final fate fitting *GRIN*

red

Very good sex show/scene.
Great dream sequence with Harry and his Harem.
Good (or evil) look into Dumbledore's thoughts and actions.
Good twist at the end with Lavender being a spy.

Great chapter! I can hardly wait for the next, I love this story!

Thanks, I'm glad you are still enjoying the story, and there is lots more to come!

red

Keep up the hard work.

Thanks, next chapter in 2 weeks.

red

Great story!
So Riddle, Pettigrew, and Dumbledore are all big bads...maybe Pettigrew it's hard to tell, but defiantly Dumbledore.

Great sex scenes, great tie in to Buffyverse, great intrigue and manuvering.

Thank you, I will be tracking!

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and, as for the Big Bad, just keep reading

red