Review of chapter "Chapter 6 - ...It's burning in my Brain!" from Markelo
Review:
I am waing for chapter 7.
Whats going to happen when Tony and Jessica come home and when Reagans telepathy kicks in
edit: But Tony and Jessica are monsters. Tony is a drunk who abuses his son and wife. And Jessica is a lush who lets her husband beat her and thier son. So the only way I could see them in a good light is if when Tony and Jessica come home they will stop drinking alchol and become better parents ... As if those two drunks could give up their drug of choice. Only the weak fall into drug usage.
Comments from author:
Slogging my way through it, as to Tony and Jess....well, I'm not one to subscribe to making any character a complete monster (...albeit, sociopaths, while unrelated, are another matter entirely.) I can't really comment on their reaction other than to say it will be a turning point in the story.
Reagans telepathy...*looks at chapters six and four* *looks back up*...hmm, yes, that should be interesting. *whistles innocently*
Review By [Markelo] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 - ...It's burning in my Brain!" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the update, I'm looking forward to more.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 - ...It's burning in my Brain!" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting story so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 - ...It's burning in my Brain!" from Studyofchaos
Review:
I was wondering if this story is still alive... Glad to see the answer is yes. Please continue.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 - ...It's burning in my Brain!" from AbscondingCascade
