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Review of chapter "Comparison" from SpacedCadet
Review:
The individuals ficlets are a bit light-weight...but as one continuous story it's excellent.

I hope you do more!
Comments from author:
Thanks! They were never intended to become continuous, but I'm glad you enjoyed them! I need to sit down and watch some more YJ before I can continue, though. They are all based solely in that (and Buffy's) universe, so to be accurate, well... you know how it is, I'm sure! ^.^ So hopefully, eventually.

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Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Comparison" from bradsan
Review:
Read it again and still loving it.

You do realize that Buffy was late for her own funeral. She should have had one when the master killed her. Luckily they did CPR. So technically she showed up around three years later. I know a little improper but I couldn't resist.

Still very good.
Comments from author:
Thank you, my friend! ^.^

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Review By [bradsan] • Date [8 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Comparison" from niamh
Review:
I love this story. Are you sure you won't continue it?
Comments from author:
If I get an inspiration for it, I definitely will. If you want to add to it, let me know and I'll open it up to you. ^.^ Thanks for the review!

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Review By [niamh] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Heh-heh! Very cool Buffy-Batman conversation.
Comments from author:
Thanks!!! ^.^

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Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginning" from RevDorothyL
Review:
The family (blood or otherwise) that slays together stays together! :)
Comments from author:
Indeed!

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Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Supermom?" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love it! The way that Superboy was pretty much ignored by Superman after being cloned by Cadmus alwasy bugged me no end, and Buffy has a terrific track record with accepting Dawn, regardless of how she came to be. I'd have dearly loved it if Superboy's DNA "Mom" HAD turned out to be Buffy, instead of Lex Luthor!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I love that I'm not the only who sees these issues and think they need addressing. Also, just imagine for a moment... Lex Luthor being called Mom. Yeah, you totally sent me there. ^.^

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Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Comparison" from SamTurner
Review:
I would warn Batman not to do it but seeing who he fights it isn't as uneven as you might think.
Comments from author:
Oh, I know! I figure that skill and training can at least let him keep up for longer than Buffy would expect. I don't think he'd win in the end, but it would be a lot more of a challenge than she'd be expecting. Thanks for reading!

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Review By [SamTurner] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Comparison" from djhardim
Review:
Better Buffy as a second genetic source than Lex Luthor.
Comments from author:
Indeed! Thanks!

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Review By [djhardim] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Comparison" from RocksandGlass
Review:
I enjoyed that, started kind of stuttery but the chapters got smoother & more of a continuous feel as it went.
Comments from author:
It's not actually a story, that's why. It's just a series of ficlets, but with many of them being in a series, I really need to go in and just rearrange the chapters so that the ones without continuations are at the beginning, and the ones that flow are at the end. Thanks for reading! Glad it's enjoyable for you!

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Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Support" from RocksandGlass
Review:
I'm just gonna put this out there, Batman paying Superman's child support for him. comic genius. Practically deserves its own whole story
Comments from author:
Haha! Thanks so much for the review!

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Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Comparison" from bradsan
Review:
hey me hoping the next story won't take long doesn't mean It has to be this short. A well even short it was funny. this was so Dawn who's story is more cooler hers or his. I bet he wasn't expecting this contest. Connor is gone feel more normal sooner then later with this bunch of people.

even short I'm glad with the update.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Yeah, I think is one where I was short on time so had to get something coherent out there before I lost a day.

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Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from bradsan
Review:
Darn hoping the next story won't take long. I would love to see Bruce and Buffy pairing and lets face it they both deserve it.

Technically Buffy is also Dawns mom, because the monks took something from Buffy to create Dawn. So you could see her as Dawns mom too.

You do know when they put some glasses on Superboy's face that Buffy will realize that Andrew could be right and Clark Kent is really Superman. Can't wait for that to happen. even sunglasses will give it away. That would be hilarious Buffy realizing that her nerd was right all the time and can't say anything about it.

update or write a sequel soon can't wait what will come next.

Edit: Yeah you are right about the clone thing. The only problem I always had with that are Dawns looks and personality. She is quite the opposite of Buffy (not in everything family after all) that's why I always see her more like a daughter than a clone. Stupid Josh never explained that part correct.
Wouldn't it be funny when Superman will also be Dawn's father. He is gone panic if that would be true. Oh his face can you see it when Buffy would tell him. you can put him on medicine when that would be true."lol" But I always thought that angel was the daddy.
Comments from author:
Technically, yes, she is Dawn's mom. But as she was inserted as a sister instead, she's actually the sister. I always wondered who the father is, though, since Dawn would be a clone of Buffy if they took *just* Buffy's essence, right?

It would be funny for Buffy to find out Andrew was right, and overjoyed that she can't actually tell him so and thus admit she was wrong because she would have promised the Bat.

Glad you're enjoying this! Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Review By [bradsan] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Very nice bit about Andrew and the secret identities.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Andrew is both under-used and under-valued a lot of the time. Especially by me. I figured he'd get some screen time where he's The Man for once. Glad you liked!

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Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from LadyHealer
Review:
Awsome! I love the warm up to the pairing of Buffy and Bruce. Well done!
Comments from author:
Haha! Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying and thanks for the review!

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Review By [LadyHealer] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from cmdruhura
Review:
So Batman's going to become Superboy's step-father? Kinky!
Comments from author:
Haha! Check out a few reviews down for comments on Superboy's issues with that. Thanks so much for the review!

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Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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