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The Odyssey of the Cave-Slayer.

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HMaxMarius
Review:
My favorite parts were the names :)

Shine - Buffy
Dusk - Dawn
Elm - Willow
Dark - Angel?
One-Eye - Xander
Chase - Cordelia

Lone Hunter??? Couldn't come up with him...
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [23 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

Did you read Clan of the Cave Slayer?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Buffy getting hit on the head with the bone after her vision of the space station from 2001 (of course not the terms used) was priceless.

Like how Shine uses the bones to drum, given Buffy's "band" excuse from Becoming.
Comments from author:
Well there was that, but I always thought that apeman on 2001... looked more like a drummer!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
Music is definitely a nicer gift from the obelisk than the invention of the club in the original (if not so practical for the times). A great addition to your previous story.
Comments from author:
Like I say, written to get the images out of my head!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xovervore
Review:
Nice; and a lovely reference to the last line of the novel with Bowman/Star Child: (she didn’t know what she’d do with the bones that made the pretty sounds) "but she was sure she’d think of something".
Comments from author:
Thanks,
D.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hecatonchires
Review:
The black obelisk's gift to Shine was percussion? Heh.
Comments from author:
Well, drumming and later music.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [10 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
I hope you will get inspired to write more Cave-Slayer stories.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Comments from author:
Ni promises but we'll see what we can do.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Cool! Music with bones in it!
Comments from author:
I was very tempted to put rocks in it but that would have been too modern!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Amberdrake
Review:
Nice. I shall continue to hope for more. :D
Comments from author:
Thank-you, I'll think on it.

D.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [9 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
So Shine discovered music, coool =D!.
Very funny take on the 2001 movie dude, congratulations =)!.
See ya!!.
Comments from author:
Thank-you muchly,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [9 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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