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Review of chapter "Chapter 4:Hello Xander, meet your fate." from BigDubWins
Review:
In my mind, FFVII is the best Final Fantasy ever made and TTH needs more fics on it. This story is great so far and I hope to see an update soon. Kind of funny that I love the gamd so much, yet have never beaten it. Damn You, Super Nova Summon!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. And im on the same FFVII boat as you, i love the game and i will post more on this Fic soon. Thanks for reading.
Review By [BigDubWins] • Date [6 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4:Hello Xander, meet your fate." from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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even if it was years ago I played FF 7 and personally liked 8 better I look forward to reading this fic.

2.

first of...that probably wasn't a wise way to wake slayers....and Yuffie??? poor X :)

3.

good the gem is coded to Xander :)


4.

hehe nice visit and I wouldn't mind seeing Shiva sitting on my bed as well :)
And X just had to taunt Murphy hadn't he?
Tx for sharing so far and on a side note, your writing got much better since ch 1 of X's dogma :) There
are still errors and so, but not too much :)
Comments from author:
Thx and im happy my writing has gotten better, i know i still have some areas i need to fix. But for my first Fics i think im doing well.

And of course i coded it to him, i mean imagine what Faith of Willow would be like with that power. I hope you keep reading my work.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [16 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4:Hello Xander, meet your fate." from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I cannot believe he taunted Murphy...
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4:Hello Xander, meet your fate." from Bluesnowman
Review:
good work
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Well...... shit" from Genuka
Review:
I ^love^ this story!
Comments from author:
Thanks im happy you enjoy it.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [1 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Show and tell…and chests aplenty" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Lol, Xander and magic STILL don't get along. He needs to learn to pay attention to his mana limits!

And Willow seems to have a bit of the green eyed monster going on with Xander having magical abilities now.

Great chapter and great story, thanks!
Comments from author:
Well to be fair Xander never one to pay to much attention or he would have learned about the mana limit from his knowledge download.

And yes Willow is a little jealous, but more worried about Xander and his being a magnet for Demon chicks that want to kill him, and just trouble in general lol.

Thanks for reading i hope you like the next update when it comes out.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [29 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Well...... shit" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
He does have Barrier up.. that should give him some assistance.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [23 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Well...... shit" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Cool. Good thing he's not still living with his parents.
It's not a video game and he's the only one with the data info uploaded. Could you please have Willow/someone mold/influence the materia into little statues, so the barrier gem looks like a small shield and the fire like a fireball, etc?
You could go the hands-off route and explain that each green materia has its own unique cut size and facet pattern that didn't show up in the low-res game... But that is still an insane amount of memorization for the girls to go through and less useful in crisis.
Heh, while I think a full 3d mold/mod would be awesome a compromise would be text/graphical stamps/intaglio designs for each.
Comments from author:
Nice ideas but not for this story, i do have some ideas as to the spells shape/casting times/etc. but for now Xander will be the only one with the knowledge.

To us the world of final Fantasy may be a game but to Xander Clouds world is a mere alternate dimension away.

But for now as for the way the spells look it will be similar to FF7 but less so, that is until i reveal the Lvling system for all the Materia, but Willow and the others will be along soon :)

I hope you keep reading.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [21 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Well...... shit" from Dragonbaita
Review:
VERY damn nice!! More PLEASE!
Comments from author:
Lol well thanks for the Very damn nice review. I'll post as soon as i can, happy to see you enjoy it.
Review By [Dragonbaita] • Date [21 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Well...... shit" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thx
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just my Luck" from shatterglass
Review:
looks great! realy hope to see more soon!
Comments from author:
Thx for the review
Review By [shatterglass] • Date [19 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just my Luck" from lillyb
Review:
I always love a good Xander story. Keep it up!
Review By [lillyb] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just my Luck" from Bobboky
Review:
Very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just my Luck" from bael
Review:
Interested to see were you take it, like the chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks, im not sure where im going to take it. I have a few ideas, but nothing is set in stone for now.

I hope you keep reading
Review By [bael] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just my Luck" from Raziel
Review:
Curious to see where you go with this it is an unusual spot to start from him already being in cleaveland but i look forward to seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

I just felt that this would be a weird place to empower Xander.
Review By [Raziel] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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