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Review of chapter "Rituals" from Shadowman
Review:
A good story I hope another chapter will come out soon.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rituals" from Genuka
Review:
Wow. This is a very intriguing story. I hope that you continue it.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rituals" from (Current Donor)nerfherder
Review:
More, please! Damn this is good!
Review By [(Current Donor)nerfherder] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rituals" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Please update!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rituals" from (Current Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Good clean work with a clear plot and development. Keep up the great work!
Review By [(Current Donor)nerfherder] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rituals" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rituals" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Lol
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rituals" from AlphaBeta
Review:
YYYEEESSSSS!!!! An update! Please don't take so long next time! Great read.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rituals" from mendal
Review:
The ambient level of magic in the buffyverse is nowhere close to the level of rifts earth.

EDIT:While all that is true don't forget they are using magic on the most powerful dimensional nexus on the planet, I wouldn't think those spells would as effective anywhere else.
Comments from author:
Not in canon, but like I said in another review, there are consequences to Xander coming home. Not a lot of the Buffy-verse demons will be affected, but some will be. As time passes more will be.

I would also note that perhaps Buffy-verse magic is just as powerful as Rifts earth, PhaseWorld and WormWood. I mean look at the botched Love Spell, the Halloween spell, the Thy will be Done spell and so on. all of thos were FAR more powerful than normal spellcasters in Rifts can create.
Review By [mendal] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rituals" from (Current Donor)tchizek
Review:
Good flashback on the destruction of Acathla.
Nice handling of Liem/Angel and getting revenge on Angelus, very nicely done!
Good way to get Jenna back, I love it!

Great chapter!
Review By [(Current Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rituals" from AnFan
Review:
Interesting chapter, I liked the ending. It seems that Xander will be getting together with Buffy given the comments in this chapter, but what of Scott? Could he become a romance interest for Joyce? After all, even if he was Xander's age when they were spliced, he's now over 30 and would be in her age range :)

You should take out the Deadboy reference in the italicized section. You mentioned in an earlier chapter that he wouldn't use that name for Angel anymore. The Broodboy reference might be a bit close also. I'd go with Broodmaster or something.

Hope to see an update a little sooner, but if not glad to see that this isn't dead at least. Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
Thank you, i missed that particular Deadboy reference.

Both Xander and Scott are mentally in their thrities ( as much as Xander could ever be that age) but don't appear that old. Plus, Scott has a lot of Xander's memories, and while Xander would say Joyce is very hot, she's also a lot like the mother he'd wished he had.

I am sorry about the delay, i am still recoving from a very trying ordeal. I'll leave it to say that if anyone ever says your lips are blue call the ambulance save your self a funny looking scar.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Explanations" from (Current Donor)tchizek
Review:
This is very interesting. I look forward to the next chapter!
Review By [(Current Donor)tchizek] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Explanations" from Cdog
Review:
Interesting story. I look forward to reading more.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [21 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Explanations" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Please update soon!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [29 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Explanations" from Zyanadryn
Review:
REally good story so far! looking forward to your next update!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [16 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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