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Review of chapter "Epilogue – Two Months Later" from navnukjent
Review:
Very nice story!
Comments from author:
Thanks. If you really liked it, I wouldn't mind a recommendation either... :D
Review By [navnukjent] • Date [6 Dec 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Two Months Later" from SilverWave
Review:
You know a sequel would be awesome :-)

Cheers.
Comments from author:
:D :D You know, you're right. And I put half a dozen sequel hooks in the two stories, and my muse is just under-motivated. She's busy with other stuff, and getting her to do what I want is rather like trying to push a boulder up a hill. A really grouchy boulder. :D
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [24 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Two Months Later" from Lydia
Review:
Good and interesting story, but I personally would have preferred more action and see either some SG Teams dealing with the Supernatural or Slayers with the Aliens. More could have happened but still overall it as pretty nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks. But this just isn't an action story. It's really a weird romance tale. If my muse ever gets inspired and forces me to write another sequel, *that* is likely to be an action story. (And yes, I have that sort of relationship with my muse.) But I have half a dozen sequel hooks scattered about in between this one and the other half of this series.
Review By [Lydia] • Date [20 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Two Months Later" from larin
Review:
I can't believe I missed this gem. There are so many good moments in this where you take a small moment and use it to really flesh out an otherwise minor character. You actually made Anise into a three dimensional character.

I hope your muse brings you back here one day.
S.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And I'm pushing my muse pretty hard right now. Unfortunately, she's the only one who is armed.
Review By [larin] • Date [19 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Two Months Later" from RGray
Review:
Excellent story and well written to go with it.
While the lack of any actual fighting taking place was a surprise given the characters involved, you managed to put together an interesting and believable storyline.
I'm going to have to go read some of your other stuff now :)

Gray
Comments from author:
Thanks! I appreciate reviews (of all kinds - I won't break in two if there's something you didn't like.) I also appreciate recommendations on stories you really liked.

Now then, this is really a 'woke up the next morning' piece that I wrote after reading a number of 'woke up married' stories on this site. But there cold easily be a fight in the future of this tale. I left a lot of sequel hooks in. So far, my muse has been uninterested. But she's fickle. And insane. :D
Review By [RGray] • Date [18 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Two Months Later" from Harmne
Review:
I know this one has been finished for a while, but I had to write and tell you that this is another of my favorites! You did a great job keeping everyone in character and I loved seeing a competent and still slightly goofy Xander thrown into the mix! Oh, if Jack O'Neill had really had a Xander to keep Anise away from him!!
Comments from author:
I love reviews, even if they're for stories I have finished. I also love recommendations, because I have a fragile ego. :D I had not planned on writing the story, but I had the idea for a 'morning after' scene, and then my muse filled in the previous night and the aftermath. Presto, a story!
Review By [Harmne] • Date [8 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Two Months Later" from normanK
Review:
Thanks great story.
Comments from author:
Hey, thanks for reading! And you wrote a review too, which is more than most people manage. By the way, I don't object to recommendation either. :D
Review By [normanK] • Date [2 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sam and the Corpse" from DarkKing
Review:
If drinking pig's blood means that Harmony has pig's blood in her veins/arteries, does that mean that if she tried to "turn" somebody that the result would be a pig vampire?

Maybe a "pigpire?" Or "vampig?"
Comments from author:
:D :D I think you could easily convince Harmony of that.

I think it's amazing that Joss turned Harmony Kendall into a much more interesting character by killing her. Shows like 'Dead Like Me' took a character and killed her and put her in much more interesting settings, but Harmony actually turned into a more interesting character.

Buffy and Xander: Harmony? Harmony has *minions*? (they both laugh)
Review By [DarkKing] • Date [15 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Two Months Later" from batzulger
Review:
I love this Xander. Easily my fave Xander based story on this site.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I like Xander. Well, I like pretty much all the characters. I even like some of the villains.

I admit it, I loved The Mayor too. He was such an amazing combination of Ward Cleaver and Saruman. "You know what you need to cheer you up? Miniature golf!"
Review By [batzulger] • Date [10 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sam and the Hok’tar" from Dayloc
Review:
While I am enjoying the story overall, the internal monologue from Carter and Xander is somewhat aggravating and is making them seem really stupid. Absolute certainty is the sign of an idiot.
Comments from author:
I've certainly met plenty of idiots who lived under the 'absolute certainty' banner 24x7. But almost every Master Detective in fiction does the absolute-certainty bit on a regular basis. (They may be wrong on occasion, but that does not stop them from trotting out their deductions and being certain they are right the very next time. Look at Sherlock Holmes!) And Carter has done it in canon and then proved herself right.
Review By [Dayloc] • Date [29 May 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Two Months Later" from lateVMlover
Review:
This was a lot of fun. I really enjoyed your vision for the future Scoobies. Forgive my ignorance, but can you tell me what hok’tar means? Thanks!
Comments from author:
Hok'tar is a Goua'uld word that combines the Goua'uld words for 'advanced' and 'human'. Nirrti is the one most associated with this, since she was doing it on Hanka (Cassandra Fraiser's homeworld) and managed to give Cassie the power to control magnetic fields (but at the 'party trick' level rather than the Magneto level) although it also nearly killed Cassie. Nirrti also did it on at least one other planet that we know of, pretending to 'cure' a plague and instead messing with peoples' DNA. She managed to get several types of mutations that came with superpowers and/or body horror. She was hoist by her own petard when she got one with enough telekinesis to be able to break a Goua'uld's neck. Oops.
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Two Months Later" from Edman
Review:
Good story.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And thanks for taking the time to drop me a review. If you really enjoyed it, you can give me a recommendation too.
Review By [Edman] • Date [12 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander and the Whole Megillah" from DieselDriver
Review:
So how good of a Betelgeuse does Xander do when he says "Showtime"?

OMG! That would be a crazy crossover.
Comments from author:
I wonder if anyone has ever written a Beetlejuice/Buffy crossover with Xander going as Beetlejuice for Halloween?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jennifer & the Debriefing, Part V: Summers" from DieselDriver
Review:
Regarding you a/n... The longer the better as far as I'm concerned. I love your writing style and am now re-reading this because it's likely better than anything I'll find on the site with a couple of possible, just barely but possible, exceptions. To paraphrase someone I'm sure, May you live long and write much.

BTW, I purchased "Tenjin" the modified version of the anathema story from your compatriot, and it was almost as good as the original fan fiction. I have to wonder if you could do the same. I would certainly buy any fiction book I knew found, if you were the author.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And thanks!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jennifer & the Debriefing, Part II: Sunnydale" from DieselDriver
Review:
This is a beautiful display of the problem of people reaching a completely wrong conclusion from having almost all of the information but not quite and not being prepared to think outside the box they have been programed in to. Boxes are nice if they fit ALL the facts but not so much if you get new facts. Quantum mechanics still drives scientists coo coo sometimes. People still think of atoms as little teeny tiny solar system like things when an electron is a wave or a particle depending on how you look at it. Schroedinger's cat is alive, or is it? You have to look and see and Looking alters the outcome.
Comments from author:
Well, have they reached a wrong conclusion yet? Sunnydale really is the worst foothold situation on the planet. It's just not a Goua'uld situation.

And I was pleasantly surprised that the text my teenager's school is using for the *easy* sciences course actually portrays electrons and electron shells fairly accurately.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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