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Review of chapter "Chapter Three - Betrayed" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
This story managed to suck me in and hold me. Despite significant errors, I didn't stop reading. This is quite an accomplishment, as I'm not overly fond of grammatical errors and this needs some serious editing and proofing. Take it as a compliment and encouragement on my part because I believe you have something very, very absorbing here, something with the potential to be much, much more.

I really hope you will continue and that you get yourself an editor who will help you develop your talent. You have good insight into people and you develop excellent dramatic tension within your story - these things are a lot harder to learn than grammar.

I look forward to the next chapter soon, please.

Blue
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three - Betrayed" from Tawnilynani
Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter! You have done a wonderful job of bringing the characters to life.
Review By [Tawnilynani] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three - Betrayed" from Alexis
Review:
It really sucks that Spike's being used in that spell, or whatever it is, as a vengeful spirit to punish Buffy for failing to save him. She has enough guilt over leaving him to die in the Hellmouth as it is. And he's long since forgiven her for that. I do love spuffy and this is going to drive an even bigger wedge between them. Although it seems like Dean's more than happy to pick up the pieces. lol

Very cool that Spike was sent to work on the asshat angels. I only hope he can get through to Cas. It would save so much badness in this world.
Review By [Alexis] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three - Betrayed" from Innogen
Review:
Heya! I'm still here! Great chapter with a lot of information. I hope you are able to continue updating if you've been able to put you RL stuff to rest. If not, I'll take what I can get when you post!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much and I'm so glad your sticking with me.
Review By [Innogen] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three - Betrayed" from Bre
Review:
Intrigue! Oooh my! How will this play out with the boys? And Spike's new "destiny" is interesting as well as puzzling as to how he fits into the grand scheme of things, especially considering the 'verses and how they play with each other. Does Spike follow Buffy? Or is he there in that world because that's where he's needed? How will this change what happens?! I need answers!

Okay, I'm not gonna lie, I really wanted to see some more Buffy/Dean action and now I feel like Spike's gonna mess shit up! Damn that Spike and damn their love! LOL - but I do love the idea of this and how it will play out. I loved the build up and seeing Spike disappear and then boom! That's where he goes! Very interesting and I like the spin, especially since Buffy has so much guilt towards Spike.

I'm enjoying Dean's budding reactions to Buffy, haha. He's like, oh wait, she is a girl but I have a lot of guilt but girls are distractions! Lol. I'm interested to see how this plays out because it really feels like there is nothing coming from Buffy regarding anything Dean-like besides feeling bad that's he a human burdened with superhero stuff - she's much more concerned with Sam, as well she should be of course considering the betrayals that happened.

On another note, give me more Dean angst! I'm so fascinated with the idea of this story and this world and how they are all intertwined and how Buffy can jump between them. I want to see Buffy arguing with Bobby, questioning the reality of those books as well as seeing Giles and Bobby together! Okay, I'm just throwing stuff out there now, lol. Great update, I can't wait to see how this plays out with Spike.
Comments from author:
Haha! Okay well first I want to address Spike's new "destiny" which really isn't much of a destiny, and more along the lines of atonement. Put it this way he's not in hell right now because he was given a choice, and since I'm not sure if that's going to be something that's actually mentioned, I figured I'd just tell you now. The Powers have there reason for wanting Spike there and so does God, but all that will be revealed in time of course.

LOL, as for Buffy. I know she's not giving off any lusty vibes, and I made her that way because well, her life has become her job and she looks at everything from a professional standpoint. It will be addressed later, but there's another reason Buffy doesn't pay attention to that stuff anymore, but I do promise next chapter will have more Buffy/Dean interaction.

I will def. try with the Dean Angst and who knows there might actually be a scene where Bobby and Giles have a conversation. LOL

Anyway hun thanks for the review "Hugs"
Review By [Bre] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Blurry" from LovelyKitten
Review:
I am seriously loving this story! Please update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! A new chapter should be up soon.
Review By [LovelyKitten] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Blurry" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Blurry" from Alexis
Review:
I'm glad to see an update to this.

Dean's fortunate to have Buffy there. She's the only one who can truly understand what it's like to be resurrected. I only hope she can get through to Sam before it's too late...
Comments from author:
Thank you so much, and I have to agree Dean's very fortunate. As for Sam well you'll just have to wait and see.
Review By [Alexis] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Blurry" from Bre
Review:
Most fascinating! What a wonderful new spin on this, the idea of Buffy jumping dimensions to add her Slayer prowess to places who need it much more than her world now. I love the idea behind it as well and how it correlates with how Dean is feeling - ripped up inside and needing something to focus on. I love the dynamic between Buffy and Sam! I love it! And the little magical baubles from Willow - I like how you're blending everything and then pushing everything forward! I can't wait to see how this plays out with the prophecy and Dean's role and how Buffy and Dean will play off each other... and Whistler! Happy! :P

I have to say, your distaste for Angel is SO POTENT! LOL - and I'm a Bangel at heart but I have learned and grown to appreciate Spuffy more than Bangel and the role both relationships played in Buffy's life. Lolololol! I just... it's so weird reading this because I'm not used to it, I don't read Spuffy fanfiction! But it's refreshing in its own way, as well. I read your bio and I just loved it, lol.

I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
LMAO! I actually already knew you were a Bangel, because I went to your website, but I'm glad your giving this story a go anyway. My distaste for Angel runs very deep. As you read on my profile, I didn't always feel that way, but since Joss decided to introduce twilight, my distaste skyrocketed. LOL, but I suppose your lucky because there are some people out their who actually think of Angel as a pedophile. I am not one of them.

Buffy's relationship with Angel was heartbreaking and tragic, but something I feel that they both grew out of. Angel more so than Buffy, and as you can see I also feel that's one of the things that prevented her from excepting a man/vampire who loved her so very much that he would move heaven and earth for her if he could.

Anyway I could rant all day about this subject, but I respect your opinion and I'm glad you can appreciate my Spuffy taste. There are a lot of people out there who can't so I'm very grateful.

As for the review I'm so glad you are enjoying it. It means a lot to me coming from such an amazing author such as yourself. I'm glad you like the dynamic between Buffy and Sam, and can tell that I purposely kept Dean more reserved than his normal self because he is torn up inside. Thank you so much for this review. I do truly appreciate it.

P.S. If you are ever willing to read some absolutely fantastic Spuffy fics, I can point you in the right direction. I'm only saying this because, the way you write Dean and Buffy's relationship, it's almost like reading Spuffy. They are a very angsty couple too.
Review By [Bre] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - Blurry" from AbigaelRose
Review:
Yippie! a chapter!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Who Will Save Your Soul" from nightshadowlife
Review:
lmfao I love her parting line!!!!!
Comments from author:
HAHAHA, Yeah I thought it was funny too. Thanks for the awesome review!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Who Will Save Your Soul" from AbigaelRose
Review:
OH how I love this update let me count the ways!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!!!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Who Will Save Your Soul" from nicjphill
Review:
Love this and am anxiously awaiting the next update! Please come back soon!
Comments from author:
I'm about to post the new one. I have to apologize for taking so long though. My creative inspiration seems to only be coming in spurts lately. Thank you for the awesome review.
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from AbigaelRose
Review:
Smash kick off I hope to hear more soon!
Comments from author:
Lol, waiting on beta.
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [5 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Xayian
Review:
I......LIKE it! Excellent start and idea.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
Review By [Xayian] • Date [31 May 12] • Not Rated
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