hello lol i have think of something can alex consomm some halloween costumm like some spartan from halo, some xman or ironman from marvel and a magical girl from magical girl nanoha, archer from fate stay night and a gundam meister or more i think that heller can think of this people like super soldier from blackwatch and add technology and magic tfrom other real to alex not invincible man but powerfull people and the need to give some other road to alex by sajuuk
Review By [sajuuk] • Date [19 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
this first chapter is good i can t wait to read the next chapter go to fanfiction.net and read the cossover with prototype i think you can find idea and new power in the crossover prototype with buffy, naruto and stargate by
Review By [sajuuk] • Date [19 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And so it begins." from Zyanadryn
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ooohhhh! right on... a xander prototype!!!! oohhhh!!! what if the military find out he...'special;'!!!!!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [18 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And so it begins." from CrystalBlaze
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This version of Heller may have had somewhat different origins due to the mix of fatigues used in the spell, so I'll let that slide.
I'm mostly surprised he didn't wish aloud that the ghost he ran into would have been his wife, at least. That, and I am rather annoyed that Heller didn't know his situation immediately. This is the Mercer/Heller viral body replacement, after all. In other words, Xander Harris' body was consumed by the Blacklight Virus the moment the spell went into effect. He certainly should have known of the supernatural after devouring that other dude. (Or Spike's dust, for that matter)
The other mess is this. Xander, on regaining control, is essentially in Alex's and James' situation. He's a Blacklight entity. This begs a clarification (and a sequel).
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [18 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And so it begins." from tchizek
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Nice, I have never played the game but I picked up enough to get a feel for what was going on in the story even without the background.
Good story, thanks!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [18 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]