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Review of chapter "Showdown" from VillageOrchid
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I'm not familiar with the classic literature creature, but I liked how it was reptilian and from another dimension (and Buffy figured that out). If it isn't sapient and there was an alter that means something with a religion -and some sapience, even if no speech ability - summoned them or opened the door. Something to investigate?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tracker" from VillageOrchid
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I like how she was testing to see if it could talk. Good instance of having to go into action right away. Glad they called for back-up first.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from VillageOrchid
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My educated guess would be skin-walkers of some kind possibly the invisible kind. On the other hand it could have been deamon mercenaries who also wanted a snack.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrival" from DieselDriver
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"I'm really not sure why so much of the ick-inducing comes out of the American Southwest."

Obviously because there's so much empty land out here to have stuff hide in... And grow worse and worse until they do something to get noticed, like shredding a team of soldiers.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Showdown" from eriktheviking
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Just another day at the office. Great writing as always, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Showdown" from (Current Donor)Listener
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Another good entry in this series, although the Buffy-isms are getting a tad much. Especially the use of -age all the time.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Showdown" from maxthehobbit
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Very good and as realistic as you can get for fighting an invisible foe(s). good job gonna start reading the next story now.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [6 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Showdown" from (Past Donor)James
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Another brilliant story.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Showdown" from Rich
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Thus opens up interesting possibilities : who built the alter, and who summoned the things, and are Maggie's old minions looking for new jobs ?
Overall, this is a solid ending to the story, with a pretty good fight scene (albeit a short one, but that's to be expected). My only quibble would be with the overusage of the Buffyspeakage - when you add "age" to a noun like "shape" or "bend" you just get a longer noun, which means you're saying exactly the same thing but taking longer to do it.
Review By [Rich] • Date [27 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Showdown" from ShyBob
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More worthy opponents for quippy and fighty Buffy! Nicely done.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [26 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Showdown" from SlowMercury
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Another interesting addition to a great series. You've made Buffy work out surprisingly well in the military -- and I love how she keeps meeting crazy-awesome people. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Showdown" from PATM
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Fantastic resolution to Buffy's kicking demon ass. I have never seen the Ambrose Bierce story before and what a chilling story it is! The adaption is well done.
Review By [PATM] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Showdown" from CPTSkip
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I just finished reading/rereading your whole series. All I can say is: Wow! Wonderful plots, amazing characterization, and a fine knowledge of US military equipment and culture, you write darn near perfect stories, fanfic or otherwise. While I think your other stories are darn good, this series is your best and it is just too fraking cool! I cannot wait to read your next story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Showdown" from Gideon
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A dislocated hip? Ouch, I bet that really hurts :( At least Haviland seems impressed, he must have really not known much about what he was getting into. Maybe he can transfer to Planning and get a good boss like Dutch too :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [25 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Showdown" from Xovervore
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Quote: Buffy Air was flying again!
Love it! You and Dave Turner are two of my favourite authors on tth. I haven't yet recommended one of your stories but I will have to in near future check them out, so as to pick which one to rec. I recall there are some I liked a lot. This story could even end up being "the one", as it is so very humorous with some lovely military details.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
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