Review of chapter "Returning Home...for a Day" from randyzoopurple
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love your series
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's a New Slayer in Town" from arianwyn
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I really like this series. My only criticism would be that sometimes you seem to have words missing from sentences. This seems to be especially the case during dialogue. There are times that you don't say who has said the previous statement and it isn't always implied. Other than that, good job on the story. I look forward to future updates.
Review By [arianwyn] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Returning Home...for a Day" from Cyberduckie
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I've read all of your stories in this series up to this point and I have enjoyed them very much. I love your ideas and your attention to detail. I am finding this series to be quite captivating. However, you need a proofreader/editor. Badly. Once you find someone to help you eliminate the plethora of grammatical and spelling errors, your series will be among the best fan fiction on the web (imho)! Thank you for sharing your imagination with us!
Review By [Cyberduckie] • Date [19 Feb 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Returning Home...for a Day" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Returning Home...for a Day" from RHatch
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good but kinda short
Review By [RHatch] • Date [26 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Returning Home...for a Day" from christytrekkie
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yeah! you're back. I would like to see an alive James & Lily don't get to read many HP fics with that gem in it.
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [26 Dec 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Have been a fan of the series since you first started posting over on yahoo (lil_red_51906 is me)!!!!
Anywhos am super excited this new set is up now, cannot wait to see how you play out OoTP and who you kill off. Kinda feel like it's gonna be Joyce but I could be wrong. Am curious about one thing though: are you gonna have Angel come back at all during this for Faith / the whole Mayor Ascension thing? I may be over analyzing some stuff... In the mean time keep up the good work :D
~Golden
Review By [GoLdEn] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Odd how the Twins get pulled into a trial. They are on a hellmouth. How many of the "muggles" there are turly unknowning of whats going on? Pleantly of non wand users there. Who don't like wand users, not to mention demons exct, exct. Toad face is in for a rude awaking, should anything else happen. Go Faith for staying good. But guessing far easier as she's got a support system. Heres to Willow and Xander as well. Willow is the most powerful non-wand user on the planet or at least close. Xander has mental powers, that rank right up there. Even if he can't get them to work right. While on the hellmouth at any rate. Still looking forward to seeing someone get pwned come Dec. Thank you for the update.
Review By [RHatch] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Suspended or Expelled" from bradsan
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love it. Hmm I'm wondering. Buffy being the Slayer and all, doesn't she have exception from using her wand at the hellmouth. She is a protector and a guardian so there has to be some rule that could overrule the Wizards rules. And because their shared power so could Harry the same rules goes for him. I think it's strange that Cedric isn't discovered it stinks if you know what I mean. They want to get rid of those two.
Another thing that crossed my mind. Knowing Buffy she wanted to know what happened to Faith and she didn't ask that sounds a little strange to me. Faith and Buffy didn't talk and I missed that part. Being Slayers those two would understand each other. Faith would open up to Buffy because she would know that she wouldn't judge her.
love it can't wait for more.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Suspended or Expelled" from randyzoopurple
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One of the best Harry potter and Buffy crossover series. I. Love this series so much and remember me best work yet. .
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [10 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Suspended or Expelled" from Morgomir
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Sorry for the late review (exams). Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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