Review of chapter "Waking Up To A Plan" from Angelsgirl
Review:
Love the story and as for your question I think you should keep her alive longer some people make the choice to turn her to quickly and it kind of messes with the story
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad that you love the story! :)
Review By [Angelsgirl] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking Up To A Plan" from bradsan
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Oh please not a vampire but immortal would be nice and maybe some extra ability's. Wouldn't there be a bond right now or does Damon have to drink from her to create that bond. I don't know about that. Can't wait when Damon find the Vervain. He will destroy it. He will snoop around and will find it or Buffy will when she will wander through the house.
Oh Zack has to grovel to Buffy to get in her grace again. so many shoes, clothes and chocolate. Can't wait for that to happen.
I forgot congratulations with your 100.000th hit on TTH.
I really hope you make Buffy Immortal and not a vampire.
Comments from author:
Thank you! As far as I know, they don't have blood bonds in 'Vampire Diaries', but the blood bonding process in 'True Blood' is like when Sookie drinks Eric's blood accidentally, he feels her emotions, but not the other way around; and he can tell where she is.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking Up To A Plan" from AbigaelRose
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Heyy ! i started following this story on ffn and fell in love with it, I like how you write Damon with affection yet keep him in character. Hope to hear more soon, -Abby
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad that you love it! That means a lot to me! I'll try to update as soon as possible! :)
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking Up To A Plan" from randyzoopurple
Review:
Yes!!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Darn Damon is gone panic when the Slayer is fighting off the Vervain. High fever, the nightmares you name it. He is really gone panic. Stupid Zack, Buffy refused it the first time who is he to decided what she needs. I hope he will feel guilty as hell and give her a lot of shoes and cloths.
Love it how Buffy defended Damon and how at ease they are around each other.
I can't wait when Damon is starting letting Buffy be herself even if he finds her questions and not doing what he wants without a fight annoying.
I really hope he won't fall for Elena and if he does I hope he finds out soon what he have already around him. I also hope that Buffy's birthday will be soon because sixteen is the age she started dating seriously.
Can't wait Stefan's reaction when he sees Buffy and how soon he is gone care about her. If Damon already care how soon will he. Stefan is gone spill won't he when he finds out about Buffy's necklace and how Damon "forced" her not to wear it.
I really hope that Buffy never goes back to her old live. to me even Joyce can stay away.
Till your next update. Oh I almost forget. Love it
Comments from author:
It was mostly just for the car ride but it may last a little longer. Damon won't fall in love with Elena. He may tease her but not love her. I'm not sure if she'll go back or not. I'm very glad you love the story! Thank you!
Yah! A story Ill enjoy (not really but it would be bearable) waiting for the next chapter. Just one question... About how long will it take for the next chapter...rough estimate will be good too. ;)
Comments from author:
Probably less than a week before the next update. I'll try my best to anyways. Glad you like it!
Review By [ShadowAlpha] • Date [26 May 12] • Not Rated
oh Damon no fair. He will give the Cross back won't he. Merrick gave it to her he can't do that to Buffy. If I were Buffy I would cherish it. He died in front of her and it would be her last reminder of him. I hope he would give it back to her and it doesn't matter anymore Buffy is coming with him and that's all that matter to him for now.
Comments from author:
He'll give it back. Just not immediately.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 May 12] • Not Rated
oh oh, now you did it. I've got all your stories on tracking. You never gone get rid of me. I really like crossovers with The Vampire Diaries and I do like Damon even when I never read the books or saw the series. What I know about it is from the Internet and I still love them. So not much negative comments if something doesn't fit in Damon character form me.
I hope they stay together and that he will be good for her. She will have it difficult enough with being the Slayer and running away from home.
Oh and don't forget Joyce and Hank put Buffy together in the asylum. Most stories it's always Hank but they did it together, it sounds unfair to put most of the blame on Hank. Everybody wants to see Joyce as a good mom but she kicked Buffy out of her home so she is not as sweet as writers wants her to be. They both are to blame. So it should be Joyce and Hank instead of Mom and Hank but that's how I see it and you don't have to see it my way. Couldn't resist, sorry.
Hope you'll update as soon as possible. Impatient much. sorry again.
edit: I know, but she didn't do anything to stop it so. To me she is as quilty as Hank is and she has to agree and sign the papers too before they could put Buffy away. And lets face it I'm a mother too so my husband or my son. not a hard descision my son wins. I have to be sure before I would do something like that to my child. But hey thats me being a mom and a child to my own parents. I would blame both if I was in Buffy situation. again thats me not any other person just me.
Comments from author:
In the series, it says that Hank was the one that forced it and Joyce disagreed but didn't try to stop it. Joyce hasn't done anything to majorly upset her yet. More will be explained later in the story.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [24 May 12] • Not Rated
...I was really excited when I read the summary; this story sounded awesome.
But then you changed the POV 3 times. And used first-person.
Just...no. I'm sorry, but that is a big no-no in writing a good story. As soon as I read first-person Buffy, I was like "ick". Few fanfiction stories are good when written in first-person. But then to change POV to a second character and have him be in first-person? Not good. And then to change and make it 3rd person? Worse.
I think this is a cool story idea but I recommend that you start over and do everything from a 3rd person-perspective.
Good luck! :)
EDIT: Also, I would change your summary. While I loved the idea of Buffy/Damon and her meeting him at 15, it scares off most readers when you write "What will happen next?" because that is a very amateur summary writing style.
EDIT #2: Yes, many people struggle with summaries. Unfortunately, people tend to judge a fanfic by its summary. Someone in the TtH Forums started a thread addressing "what makes a great summary". It is located here: http://forum.tthfanfic.org/index.php?topic=7421.0
I suggest you take a look at it. It can be very helpful for getting new ideas.
Comments from author:
The POV changing and first person POV is only this chapter. As for the summary, I suck at them. 15 isn't the age they get romantically involved.