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Review of chapter "The End?" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Excellent fic. On to the next
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [26 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End?" from maxthehobbit
This was as good as I hoped it would be. I've read several different takes on how Black outed the rat, this one was different in the way Buffy came in the story. Good take on the whole thing. Strange writing part 2 when part 1 isn't finished, but I'm on to part 3 now.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Half Truth" from maxthehobbit
I generally don't like HP stories very much, but I have found that the way certain people write makes HP more interesting. Happily I now see that you are one of those authors I like. I only meant to read about three chapters to see if I liked it or not and I see I'm already on chapter 6.

Will leave a review when I finish which will apparently be in the next few hours.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End?" from AllenPitt
During his trial, wouldn't Peter rat out (heh) Sirius as an illegal animagus also?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Replacement" from Zorgdub
OK, now that I'm done reading, I can say with confidence that it was a really good story. Maybe it could have used a bit more tension, but I think it's OK to focus on the characters. We'll apparently get out share of action in the next story!

I don't think Buffy would make a good DADA teacher (and not because she's a Slayer) since she never got to learn the 6th and 7th years spells (not to mention those taught late in 5th year). She may have a lot of experience battling dark forces, but not the wizarding way.
On the other hand, she could handle the first years while someone else would handle the latter ones, although that's not how Hogwart has worked.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quick Thinking" from Zorgdub
This is a pretty neat story. Not only an interesting and original premise, but also well written (good flow, correct English, good pacing, clear narration).

However, there is something that bothers me : why would have Buffy known the Patronus charm? It's not a 5th year spell, and managing to perform a fully manifested patronus is a really impressive feat only talented witches manage ; not only that but unlike Harry and friends, she did not have the motivation of keeping Dementors away to learn the spell outside the normal curriculum.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End?" from bradsan
You did good. I love the way you give the story your own twist. I stopped reading after chapter seven because I wanted to read more chapters at once. I don't regret it. I really love how you waited with the money till you could use it and wave it in the story.

I can see Buffy being a Pitt bull with Snape. He is lost she won't let him escape "LOL". He finally has a friend he can fight for, he needs that. I hope he won't be evil. He can't be because he didn't tell a soul about her real name. And when he is or was Buffy is known for turning evil to good.

Now I'm gone read story three.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End?" from draconis
Good story, well written.

I hope you'll clear up the "to be continued" bit.
It directly contradicts the story's website "Complete" classification.

If it is going to be continued in another story in the series, or if the story's classification is in error, it would be nice to have it clarified or corrected. Thanks.
Review By [draconis] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End?" from Misty
I can't believe it's ended. Thank you & waiting patiently for the next story
Review By [Misty] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Captured" from CageFire
Another good chapter. I wonder if fudge is going to screw this up too.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Captured" from Misty
Oh no. I have a strange feeling something's going to go wrong :) Thank you for another great chapter.
Review By [Misty] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Padfoot's Return, part 1" from punzl
God job in adding Buffy to this scene! A lot of the time, when this scene comes up in other stories, it sounds awkward when it's not completely rewritten. You kept it close to the book and still made it sound natural.

When I read the book, I couldn't figure out why they put Peter in something that he could morph out of... Why didn't Remus or Sirius stun or petrify Peter? Or some other, much more advanced technique that only adults out of school would know? Then Peter wouldn't have gotten away and Remus changing wouldn't have mattered. I mean, they knocked Severus out! And then they floated him along! Wtf? Peter's betrayal didn't rate him at least a similar treatment as Severus?

Sorry, ranting. Nice update!
Review By [punzl] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Padfoot's Return, part 1" from Misty
I don't suppose you are going to be fab & not make it the same as the book? Or is that too easy? Thank you for another fab chapter
Comments from author:
:) I'm afraid you will just have to wait and see... I have part 2 already written, I just need to check through it etc so I shouldn't be keeping you waiting too long. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Misty] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Marauders Strike Again" from ChikaraKatherine
The pawns are now all in motion. The players are soon to learn what they thought. Was true, isn't what it was. What is true, is going to come at them like a truck. Got to like Harry's distrust for adults. Then again that would be Albus fault. The Dursleys aren't known for being decent let along good family. So its a wonder he trusts anyone. Buffy's going to lay the smack down on someone for this. Sirus won't be the only murderous one. Even money on Buffy to beat them all to the punch. Once she gets her hands on rat boy he's toast. Burnt toast. Fudge is a fool. Surounded by people playing him for one. Never let it be said Malfoy senior was stupid. Well ultra stupid, if Luicas had realized a few things. Perhaps like how the real world around him was working. He would have left England and its backwaters stupidity. Wizarding England clearly was filled with stupid zelots. Excellent progression of the plot. Loved how you wrote everyone. Just a joy to read from start to finish. The plot is just so very well balanced. Great mix of Harry/Buffy stuff.
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Renewed Friendships" from Eureka
Hmm sounds like harry is going to be in trouble IF she can prove that he was there... :P
Review By [Eureka] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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