That was a blast. The story is really well written (which isn't as common as I'd like) and the many characters are lively and believable. That was a very enjoyable read, and I thank methos for pointing me in that direction.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [26 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I'm just re-reading this and the line about Grandma Peggy having an adventure stealing a "High-Tech Nazi submarine right out from under Hitler's nose." jumped out at me. Hmmmmm...Since Cap is under the ice, who might they have gotten to help with that? Maybe a red-suited android we saw under glass during the Captain America movie and an Atlantian prince who had his own reasons to hate the Nazis/Hydra, and don't forget the Howling Commandos are still around. Let's also not forget a certain ensouled vampire with some experience in recovering subs. I may be asking for a lot, but its worth a try.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Whoa! This a very well written story. I usually don't really care for crossover stories of BTVS and superheroes that put them in the same verse but in this case you made it work very convincingly. In my humble opinion you're a hell of a writer and I'm definitely checking your other stories and recommend this one.
Thank you for sharing with us!
Review By [lastjuan] • Date [5 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Well-played reveal on the Avengers/BtVS cross, but the X-men at the end was a bit over the top. D and D were freakin outrageous; I feel bad for whoever tries to kidnap them next. Your Buffy characterization was great, with solid narrative and definitely in character. Hope to see the sequel continued.
*“So far? French and Spanish, cause I took them in school, Russian, Japanese, Arabic, Esperanto, and Latin cause I begged Giles to teach me, and I can read Sumerian and Egyptian Hieroglyphics,” Dawn rattled off,*
It's canon that Dawn reads Turkish (7x20, 'Touched'). Also it's strange that she can speak Esperanto; that's pretty much a dead language now, and nothing has ever been written in Esperanto that wasn't written in an more useful language first. More people speak Klingon than Esperanto and the article where I picked up that piece of information was using it as an example of the decline of Esperanto not of the growth of Klingon. I suggest that you insert Turkish in place of Esperanto.
Just finished this. So much to comment on, so forgive me if I miss something--
I like the Buffy/Stark interaction.
Xander seeing the possible interactions fits. Tying in Scott Summers, and then acknowledging the family ties while giving a plausible reason (interference) is good. It explained it so much better than the oft seen 'just related suspend disbelief' plot device.
The party description was great.
It's nice to see Coulsen.
I am looking forward to the sequel! Thanks for writing.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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