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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)RavenWoodbane
Review:
Awesomeness !! Hoping for more soon ... Um, just checking but will xander become Bi Cause of Jon-Claude sexual orientation ?
Comments from author:
Well, for the most part Jean-Claude preferred women. It was only in the instance of Asher they he was swayed. All the other sex, well he was hundreds of years old. I assume he just got bored. Xander, not likely to get bored in his first lifetime. Besides, he was surrounded by plenty of beautiful women.

Buffy, Willow, Cordy, Ms. Calender, Joyce, Drusilla, Kendra, Faith, Tara, Anya, Dawn, I could go on. There was like no un-attractive women in Sunnydale. So to answer your question, nope on bi. Even if he is no longer as bothered by it.


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Review By [(Past Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [23 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JayW
Review:
HAH~! That was awesome! What a great find on Halloween!
Review By [JayW] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from starwolf
Review:
very well done.
if you do decide to continue, in the original Xander kept all the military memories. it would be interesting to see how he handled 4 hundred years of experiences.
thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Zyanadryn
Review:
hahah! good short!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from potterinu
Review:
Complete? This feels more like the first chapter of a series. Please continue.
Review By [potterinu] • Date [27 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from OdinMage
Review:
Any chance of a continuation of this?
Comments from author:
Dunno, maybe. But I just wanted someone to come in and say WTF to Ethan messing with all those kids.



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Review By [OdinMage] • Date [26 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
Err .. where is the rest of it ????
Excellent start...
Comments from author:
Its just JC showing up and bitching about Halloween.


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Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [26 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Comments from author:
Thanks.


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Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TTrunks
Review:
This so deserves a bit more. Also while I get the vampires view, since he was around for so long seems like he'd get the whole "be careful what you wish for" thing. I sort of wish you'd continue after the spell just so we could see how the vampire Xander and Angel got along, especially if Angel had read the books.
Comments from author:
I dunno if I'd make Xander stay a vampire from the AnitaBlake-verse. Sure, it'd be interesting. But Jean-Claude's core abilites are all sex based. Hell, it'd end up like Anita when she first got the Adeaur and had to have sex twice a day.

Sure, Willow would probably raise her hand to take that bullet. But then Cordeila comes along, not to mention Buffy. And we've got an orgy story.

PS: Angel would lose his mind if he found out he could never have sex, while Xander 'has' to have sex. It'd be a total mind screw and make him hate Xander even more. lol



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Review By [TTrunks] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Myauzo
Review:
How is this the end? Ha can't you just picture it if Xander dressed up as Anita? Everyone would have been shot.
Comments from author:
Depends on what part of the series. Early? Yeah, Anita would just shoot everyone. Later? She just might decide to have sex with everyone. I think Xander would be uncomfortable either way.

Thanks for the review.


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Review By [Myauzo] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent start, doesn't really seem complete though yet
Comments from author:
Its just a quick ficlet. Something to set the stage. I wanted JC to get his thoughts on Halloween out. Despite all his city ruling, leather wearing, Anita gangbanging, the guy was rather down to earth. For a vampire.

And turning kids into there costumes was just rude. lol Thanks for the review though.


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Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This was fun, but didn't feel "complete" more like part 1.
Comments from author:
I dunno, I might add more later. But we all know how Halloween ends. Sure, some people write Xander keeping the powers/abilites and all that. But I just wanted JC's opinon on the whole thing. Which was clearly, 'who does this to children?'

Thanks for the review.


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Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Good start. Really does need more.
At the very least this needs to go until the spell is broken just to see what happens to Xander.
Thanks
Comments from author:
Thanks. I dunno, I might add something after a while. But this being a ficlet, I didn't want a whole 'story' and more of just Xander dressed as someone who'd be annoyed at the way Halloween went.

Ethan was a bad bad man for that.



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Review By [LFW] • Date [25 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Loatroll
Review:
I'd love to see more! Thanks for the great read regardless if you continue this, and I am looking forward seeing more from you :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I just wanted to show what an adult might have to say about this whole thing, and JC got snagged cuz I couldn't see Xander dressing as simply an adult.


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Review By [Loatroll] • Date [25 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Valandar
Review:
Just one thing... I lost track of how often you swapped "their" and "there".
Comments from author:
Didn't realist I'd done that. Bad beta reader, bad.



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Review By [Valandar] • Date [25 May 12] • Not Rated
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