Review of chapter "They meet" from bradsan
But you know what, Buffy and Faith will always being the chosen ones because they are the last chosen ones. The other slayers they weren't chosen they are activated by magic all at once. Those two are chosen by a higher power so they always have the title the chosen ones.
Again loved it. Thanks for writing.
Review By [bradsan
] • Date [5 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "They meet" from Cutiepie
I'm afraid that I don't have much specific to say other than that I liked this enough that I have placed you on tracking so that I can read anything else you decide to post. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Review By [Cutiepie
] • Date [27 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "They meet" from HananeELmokkadem
Loved it. It was interesting to read how well you Incorporated Clark into this story.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem
] • Date [26 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "They meet" from Listener
I really liked the premise of this story. You worked everything in from the last few episodes and, even though some things changed as a result of Clark's arrival, some people still died. I hate it when one hero makes everyone live.
I particularly liked Faith saving Spike and the possibility of a sequel what with Caleb in the Phantom Zone.
This could use a good wash and brush up with the grammar broom, though, and perhaps it could've benefited from being maybe 1.5x as long -- letting us really get into the heads of these characters while drawing out the action a bit.
Overall though I definitely enjoyed the story.
Review By [Listener
] • Date [25 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]