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Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from banner
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That was amazing. I love the way Dawn and Sam grew so close, and the portrayal of Castiel, especially, was wonderful.
Review By [banner] • Date [2 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from Angelinasway
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Loved this story so much. It was so unique and just amazing. Beautifully done and I love your Dawn characterization. I am eagerly awaiting the sequel.
Review By [Angelinasway] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from Bre
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Gah! What a fun story! So quipped and fun. I don't have much experience in the Dawn fanfiction realm, and that's why I'm saying I love reading these stories where she's portrayed so well. I thought this was a fun twist - great job! *fingerscrossedforasequelsomedaymaybe*
Review By [Bre] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Add Batteries" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Wow. This was breathtakingly awesome, as always! Well done!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from WomanofLetters
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I really do hope you follow up with that sequel. Loved this story. More, please! I want more Bobby, Dawn/Sam, Buffy/Castiel or Buffy/Dean (whichever way you want to play it) and more Crowley... Please!
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paved with Good Intentions" from WomanofLetters
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I haven't said much about the Crowley thread in this story yet. Loved the scene with him, Cas and Dawn, and the scene with him and Lilah.

Great chapter!
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When Opportunity Kicks in a Door" from WomanofLetters
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Ah finally we get to the love scene... :) Yay!

Dawn's insecurity: "Look. You were stuck with me. You didn't have a choice. I was the only one you could talk to, so of course you had to be friendly to me." I liked the dialogue here, throughout that whole scene. Also Dean's grudging "I won't interrogate you tonight" decision and Bobby giving him hell off-scene. The elements are coming together nicely.
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "No Good Deed" from WomanofLetters
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It's gotta be difficult to come to with two different sets of memories to integrate -- one completely alien to you. Not to mention having Dean pointing a gun at the woman who just saved you. And struggling to make it all make sense.

Kudos for the realism of Dawn's and Sam's reactions, and the descriptions of her doing the spell that she'd practiced when researching with Sam. Also loved the mention of Willow doing basic Magic 101 on spells and what elements are needed or could be dropped with Dawn. Wonderful details that really contribute to the world you're depicting.
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Ever Land" from WomanofLetters
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I didn't think the ending was too easy. He just underestimated her, based on his assessment of ghouls and what he'd already found on the scene.

Where I thought the ending was a bit too easy was possibly the chapter where she kicked Xander, Giles and Buffy out of her house and they all just fell in line. I thought they'd put up more of an initial fight. But then, you did lay the groundwork of them worrying that they needed to treat Dawn more like an adult (of Buffy feeling that way, anyway) and Dawn was fairly forceful with them. I think it was more the shock and surprise of her standing up to them like that that had them obeying her.

I enjoyed this chapter. You clearly show Dawn's conflict: her shock/trauma at having Soulless Sam treat her like a threat/monster, her seeing the differences between her Sam and Soulless Sam. Yet she acted quickly, doing what was necessary even though it was obviously hard for her. It's nice to see Dawn portrayed as a strong, independent, badass character.
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Dream of Sammy" from WomanofLetters
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Well I don't know why this distressed reader was so distressed. I love what you've done, I think your characterization of Dawn and Sam and the BTVS crew are spot on. So just shove those pms into the trash bin and hit "ignore" mode. :) And anyone who uses words like that in a review deserves to be ignored.

Dawn's nightmare and Sam's conjuring up of Dean and Impala - very cool. And I loved how Dawn just shoved everyone out the door and took matters into her own hands.
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Objectifying Men" from WomanofLetters
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Dawn teasing Sam was so cute... Oh, yeah, she's pure evil. Nice relationship-building, what with the long walks, the time in class, the dates. I'm sure Buffy would love the fact that her sister is dating a glowy orb soul. :)

And of course, Xander would be the one she trusts. But he's probably gonna get all neanderthal-protective on her now.
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Club Glow-y Ball of Light" from WomanofLetters
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So Sam figures out some facts about Dawn's dimension. And Dawn gets wigged out because of the Hell thing. But also because - why am I trusting this soul I don't know anything about and he knows I'm the key?!!!

Love Dawn's babbly freak-out session and Sam completely understanding where she's coming from. Also Sam's inner Dean. And Dawn coming to a decision - I'm gonna find a way to help this guy.

Yep, those glowy balls better stick together. :)
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Here Comes the Welcome Wiggins" from WomanofLetters
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The differences in how Buffy, Willow and Dawn react to Sam-in-Orb are fun. Buffy has the "wiggins" immediately. But Dawn - she doesn't get them until Sam starts talking to her from a distance: "Dawn decided it was time to welcome that expected 'wiggins' right about now." And Willow is all - Why can't I talk to this soul?, looking at it as a failure of her abilities as a witch, and looking at things from a decidedly more scientific perspective, even considering destroying the orb.

Andrew's pizza dream and theories of the orb as a Ghostbusters-like "soul-catcher" were just perfect - a nice humorous touch.

Like the way you're developing the relationship between Sam and Dawn. She's very tentative still, although she's already decided she needs more time with glowy-ball... Also nice that her natural feelings of needing something of her own- being more than the key- are coming out.
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Add Batteries" from WomanofLetters
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I love this story. Gotta tell you. I've already read the whole thing -- twice. But I like to give a chapter-by-chapter review. So my review for chapter one:

Love the way you show Sam's tortures in Hell, not too graphically but well enough that we can tell it's a combination of physical and psychological and he (not Adam) is getting all of Lucifer's attention. Poor Sam! Also the Crowley and Lilah scenes are well-done, she being just the right sort of smooth bitch that Lilah is and Crowley being... well, Crowley. Snarky and manipulative with a veneer of oily salesman over it all.

But I love the way you characterize Dawn, especially. She's got the combination of freak trying for the normal life which really does mesh well with Sam, and we see it in Chapter 1.

My favorite lines so far: "The back-up was for emergencies, but she knew without a doubt that the call was not an emergency. At least not an Apocalypse-loving-vengeance-demon-took-my-sexual-organs-and-ate-my-baby type of emergency. In other words, not their kind of emergency." You had me laughing!
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Follow the White Rabbit" from EnchantedFae
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So this story just kept me up so far past a normal bedtime (5am) and it is all your witty little fault. *giggles*
Amazing story. I write Dawn/Dean and now I want to switch...holy crap no one has ever done that to me before nor would they get me to admit it. So SHUSH no telling on me.
This is my new favorite story and I think you should not end it. Possibly a sequel? Them hunting? Maybe just some ficklets?
Anyways you are amazing I laughed out loud so many times and nearly cried at the end there.

You are my new favorite person.

I am exhausted so I am not speaking well right now.

To sum it up, amazing story, so well written, funny and touching.
Review By [EnchantedFae] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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