Good start. Keep up the good work.

Just stumbled on this and thought I'd give it a try. It has potential, especially if you don't leave it hanging forever (as I've done to my own "big" story).

Pella? Definitely a name given by an 11-year-old. Just makes me think of the Pella brand windows. *giggle* Maybe that is even where she got the name from.

I'm intrigued...I hope you continue this soon, it has the potential to be quite good. Though, 11 years old? That seems really out of place for the time....sadly that isn't as unlikely now, but it would have been when Prue was 11.

I really like your story so far. I hope the next chapter is very soon. Thank you for accepting my challenge. Good Luck!

interesting fic so far! can't wait to read more :)

I'm liking this story so far ...are the scoobies gonna be in it....and is there gonna be a jealous willow ...?

LOL. How fun that Alice is a whitelighter. Eww, Prue was only 11?! I have a feeling that is one ugly story of how Buffy/Pella was conceived.

So... Pru is still alive, BUT Paige has 'found her sisters' & knows she's a Halliwell? Wow. So it's a bit AU even before Buffy finds them? And based on the 'jingling' Buffy also knows about the Elders? Makes me think she might be part white lighter.
Eleven ?!?! Wow. I wonder if Pru's sisters even know about "Buffy". THey would have been very young at the time.

one punch and down he is serves him right. got this one on tracking.

Great start. Love the the KO. He really deserved it. And if he tries to press charges, she can go all blonde valley girl with the police and they'd never believe him.

I can't take credit for the hit. I just edited the chapter after a few suggestions from reviews. Although I agree; he really did deserve it! :)
Yeah, that's a good one! No one would ever believe Buffy's got slayer strength!

Very interesting start, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Also, poor Buffy, she totally should have bitch-slapped Hank before she left *grins*

Thinking about adding that in. Think I should?

So if she'd had some 'special' talent or been super-smart, he would have liked her? Yikes. Next up--is she 'instead of' Paige or is Paige her twin? Either way would be interesting. Hm. I sure hope she arrives before Pru dies, otherwise if they're all about "you are needed to make up the power of 3 again" that might relate to the earlier 'nothing special', i.e. she might think she was only wanted to replace a missing Charmed One......
Wow --so, (possibly) she's the Slayer, a Halliwell witch, AND a half-Whitelighter? That's got to be some kind of record.

Yeah, Hank's a moron. I never liked him.
And the adoption question....that's going to be answered in the next chapter. Can I say none of the above? :)
And yes, this is before Prue dies.

She should have socked him one right in the jaw.

What a piece of poop, this doofus is. And that may be an insult to doofuses (doofusi?) everywhere.

Pella? Hmmm....sounds good to me.

Of course Penny and Patty are going to be pissed when they find out what kind of a father she had. Not to mention her sisters.

Looking forward to more.

Yeah, I didn't even think of that! I'm thinking about adding that in. Think I should go for it? Cause your right, I never liked Hank.
Yeah, the name is starting to grow on me. I wanted something related to Elizabeth...and don't ask how that popped into my head.