Wow, really love this story - keep coming back to it (I've read it several times now) in the vain hope there'll be more! Really well written, it's easy to picture the scenes and the characterisation is great!
I definitely enjoyed the story, although it suffers from the usual will they won't they and the Buffy Gets Pregnant trope. Still, strong writing and a compelling story kept me interested the entire way through.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Glad you read it all the way through even though you didn't care for parts of it.
Review By [Listener] • Date [22 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I'm slugging through all the fabulous Buffy/Dean fics on here and I just finished this one and blargh! So pretty! I love, love the idea of it - you managed to write it so nicely so that what Buffy was feeling was Dean missing. Oh man, it was like her heart was ripped out and that matched perfectly with how she felt in S6, lovely correlation with that! It was fun reading them getting to know each other at first, it was so innocent and sweet and all the actions made more sense the more we started to understand about what was happening. It's so weird reading him that way because I write him so much harder lol - this is NOT a bad thing, please don't take it that way! :P I made myself not read anything for a while so I didn't accidentally siphon off someone else's story lol but I figured, enough was enough and you did a great job with Dean at 22 - he's yet to be so damn jaded as he is in later seasons and it was just... so sweet, to read it that way!
And what a twist! Haha! A very nice idea, I loved it.
Comments from author:
Thank you for such a lovely thoughtful comment. This really means a lot to me. What's funny is I do the same thing when I write. I won't read other fic for a while because I don't want their ideas to influence me. Thank you for your comment about 22 year old Dean. He is so angry and damaged now I have to rewatch season one spn just to get some frame of mind.
Your story was so good! Although, I wanted to kill you when Dean came out of his coma and found Buffy in Sunnydale and she didn't remember him. Thanks for the happy ending! I'm really glad she finally remembered him.
Comments from author:
Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it and decided not to kill me. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing. I posted a different ending on ffn.net still happy, just different.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [12 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Aww it's finally done. I read both endings as well. While I liked this ending, the other one felt more satisfying. Not sure if you will be doing a sequel, but if not it was a great story. Thanks for the good read!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for reading both endings!! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for the review, it means a lot.
Review By [Padma] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Very tidy and lovely ending. All around great read. I wonder if stealing Buffy's memory of Dean made this meeting all the sweeter and saving Deans life in the process. The take John and Bobby have on the Slayer and its demonic influence is strange and I would like to see this story move on to that revelation.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. Bobby and John researched the slayer origins and were worried for Dean because what could Dean have done to get a slayer after him? They didn't know she liked him, too.
Ok so totally love this story.....please tell me there is going to be a second one!!! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for the love :) It means a lot to me that you like it enough to want a sequel.
Review By [Angelsgirl] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I almost didn't get to the after series tag. Not sure how I feel about the lack of au stuff caused by their relationship, but glad they could have a happy ending.... and new beginning.
Comments from author:
Thanks for continuing to read and review.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated