Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

The Lightning Strike

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from spk
Review:
Fantastic story!! So unique. Loved your characterizations. Great job! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm so glad you liked it. I worked really hard on this big bang so I really appreciate you taking the time to read it. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [23 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Morgoes
Review:
Wow, really love this story - keep coming back to it (I've read it several times now) in the vain hope there'll be more! Really well written, it's easy to picture the scenes and the characterisation is great!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much, that really means a lot to me. Have you read the alternate ending? If I do a timestamp or any continuation of this it would probably be from that one. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8182115/8/The-Lightning-Strike
Review By [Morgoes] • Date [16 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Tawnilynani
Review:
Loved the story, wish there were more chapters to read.
Comments from author:
aw, thank you so much, that means a lot.
Review By [Tawnilynani] • Date [17 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Buffyxo
Review:
What a beautiful story i loved reading it! :)
Well written!
Really enjoyed reading it, well done :D
Comments from author:
Wow! Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me. You made my week.
Review By [Buffyxo] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
I definitely enjoyed the story, although it suffers from the usual will they won't they and the Buffy Gets Pregnant trope. Still, strong writing and a compelling story kept me interested the entire way through.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Glad you read it all the way through even though you didn't care for parts of it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [22 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Bre
Review:
I'm slugging through all the fabulous Buffy/Dean fics on here and I just finished this one and blargh! So pretty! I love, love the idea of it - you managed to write it so nicely so that what Buffy was feeling was Dean missing. Oh man, it was like her heart was ripped out and that matched perfectly with how she felt in S6, lovely correlation with that! It was fun reading them getting to know each other at first, it was so innocent and sweet and all the actions made more sense the more we started to understand about what was happening. It's so weird reading him that way because I write him so much harder lol - this is NOT a bad thing, please don't take it that way! :P I made myself not read anything for a while so I didn't accidentally siphon off someone else's story lol but I figured, enough was enough and you did a great job with Dean at 22 - he's yet to be so damn jaded as he is in later seasons and it was just... so sweet, to read it that way!

And what a twist! Haha! A very nice idea, I loved it.
Comments from author:
Thank you for such a lovely thoughtful comment. This really means a lot to me. What's funny is I do the same thing when I write. I won't read other fic for a while because I don't want their ideas to influence me. Thank you for your comment about 22 year old Dean. He is so angry and damaged now I have to rewatch season one spn just to get some frame of mind.
Review By [Bre] • Date [14 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from KnightOwl
Review:
Your story was so good! Although, I wanted to kill you when Dean came out of his coma and found Buffy in Sunnydale and she didn't remember him. Thanks for the happy ending! I'm really glad she finally remembered him.
Comments from author:
Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it and decided not to kill me. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing. I posted a different ending on ffn.net still happy, just different.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [12 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Padma
Review:
Aww it's finally done. I read both endings as well. While I liked this ending, the other one felt more satisfying.
Not sure if you will be doing a sequel, but if not it was a great story. Thanks for the good read!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for reading both endings!! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for the review, it means a lot.
Review By [Padma] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from stopwatch
Review:
I have enjoyed this story from start to finish. Please tell me there is a sequel in the works. I would love to see Dean and Buffy's families interact.
Comments from author:
Aw, thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [stopwatch] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from gracerealized
Review:
Very fun read with a happy ending, even if they had to work for it and wait for it. lol Sometimes earning it makes it all the sweeter ... ;)

Thanks!
:)
Comments from author:
aw, thanks. I agree, working for it makes it mean more. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [gracerealized] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from aidensmom
Review:
Together again! :) Love it, keep it coming.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Review By [aidensmom] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from PATM
Review:
Very tidy and lovely ending. All around great read. I wonder if stealing Buffy's memory of Dean made this meeting all the sweeter and saving Deans life in the process. The take John and Bobby have on the Slayer and its demonic influence is strange and I would like to see this story move on to that revelation.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. Bobby and John researched the slayer origins and were worried for Dean because what could Dean have done to get a slayer after him? They didn't know she liked him, too.
Review By [PATM] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from JeanClaudeslover
Review:
Love it!!! This was great. I'm glad they found eachother
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Review By [JeanClaudeslover] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Angelsgirl
Review:
Ok so totally love this story.....please tell me there is going to be a second one!!! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for the love :) It means a lot to me that you like it enough to want a sequel.
Review By [Angelsgirl] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I almost didn't get to the after series tag. Not sure how I feel about the lack of au stuff caused by their relationship, but glad they could have a happy ending.... and new beginning.
Comments from author:
Thanks for continuing to read and review.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Page: 1 of 5 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking