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Review of chapter "Pieces of the puzzle" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
quite fun so far and I hope to see more of this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [26 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pieces of the puzzle" from serenityselena
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interesting chapter...
hope to read more soon ^_^

Merry Christmas!
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [24 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pieces of the puzzle" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
I love the Kingpin perspective, it makes this story seem more real somehow.

Thanks for a great chapter!

Tom.
Comments from author:
Yeah. It was part of the reason why I added it in. I needed someway to portray the fact that these events have a large impact not a small one. I notice that people tend to ignore the fact that Kingpin is a business man, one who services are outside the legal spectrum but a business man all the same. The fact that Kingpin does have a heart is something that people tend to forget when they write the man. The Batman Spider-Man comic cross-over were Kingpin could have sunk Manhattan to cure his ailing wife or let her die prove that much. He knew his wife would never forgive him if he sunk Manhattan even to save her, and he never intended to go along with Ra's plan in the first place. He had let slip information that allow for Spider-Man and Batman to follow him.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [22 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pieces of the puzzle" from djhardim
Review:
Good. One correction, the assassins should be Tarakan rather than Tenarak.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [21 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pieces of the puzzle" from Harry
Review:
Fisk may be a pain in the rear, but even he knows when its best to give the hero's a chance to do what they do best. When you are dealing with W&H, who Fisk has NO LOVE FOR, its best to hedge ones bets by tipping off the hero's. Now, I HOPE that the Ghost Rider takes out Glorificus. That is one pain, that I do NOT want to see around! And, as for the Black Mage and Yellowstone, its in everyone's best interest to prevent that from happening. It blows, the world goes. And even Fisk does not want that to happen.
Review By [Harry] • Date [21 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pieces of the puzzle" from Harry
Review:
Time to let the battles commence! W&H, you are dead meat. Time to pack up shop and set up a large number of little places. GR is about to take on Glory, and Electra is going on her own hunting trip. Now, as for Wisdom, its time to put that Flash Drive to work and start destroying those that were in bed with the Watchers Council for their own profit!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shocks" from Harry
Review:
If the mission that Logan referred to is the one that I am thinking of, it WAS a mess! It involved Cap, Logan and the Widow. Now, I think that everyone involved in what caused Faith to go to the Dark Side, had best rethink what they have thought. They, including Giles, were ALL set up!
Comments from author:
No, it was the 50's flashback Omega Red mission where Creed killed the person they were trying to extract
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "revenge and hell to pay" from Harry
Review:
You brought Pete Wisdom in on this as well? YES! Shame Kitty won't hear about this. With her skill in computer tech, she could be helping Pete out in no time flat. And I think that W&H is going to wish that they had never gotten mixed up with the Punisher in the first place!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introductions" from Harry
Review:
Well, F told B what for and why in no uncertain terms! And we won't have to worry about Glory for a LONG TIME! GR is taking care of that. Now, W&H had best start looking for a new place to set up shop. When the Punisher is on your case, you either close up shop, or risk utter destruction!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from Harry
Review:
This is a ALL SCOOBY ALERT! I repeat, A ALL SCOOBY ALERT! Time to put differences aside! If the Hand want to use Jenny Calendar/Jenna Kalendash as the new host for the beast, its time to go to work! This is going to take a LOT of work to avoid a fiasco the likes of which could threaten the ENTIRE WORLD!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Strike" from Harry
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Easy G-Man, EASY! This is not a time to let the Ripper out to play! Especially with the allies that Faith has outside to back her up. They could turn you into dust in no time flat!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "clearer picture and karma can be a bitch" from Harry
Review:
Kingpin may be a pain in the rear, but he does have his points. Now, to see how well the Punisher handles W&H. As for the battle in NYC, it is a PLEASURE seeing two of my favorite X-Men in this battle. Kitty and Logan are two people who when they get in a fight, you do NOT want to be near them! As for the Hellfire blast, can you say GHOST RIDER? SURE YOU CAN!!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sunnydale reactions" from Harry
Review:
Well, its not Glory. But whoever it is, knows Ogun. And that means that Kitty Pryde and Logan are going to get involved it this takes place!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "After the verdict" from Harry
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Inferno? I remember reading that Marvel crossover! And if what Stick is saying, that if they don't stop the Beast, then Hell will come to earth, means only one thing: GLORY!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cryptic prophecies and court dates" from Harry
Review:
Beast of the Hand could be Faith. And if that is the case, the Blade is Elektra!
Comments from author:
Did you read past that the Beast is a reincarnated Jenny Calender
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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