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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Alkeni
Review:
I like this fic a lot and you should update it. Like, right now. :P
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [10 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Aslook
Review:
Are you going to bring Harry back or leaving him dead? Because I could just see her whacking him in the middle of a ritual for dying on her!
Review By [Aslook] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Christy
Review:
Really liking this so far...can't wait to read more
Review By [Christy] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting idea so far, hope to read more.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RTVFan
Review:
Great story! I can't wait to see how Murphy handles the Buffyverse.
Review By [RTVFan] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Coldhands
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Hurray! A new engaging, well-written story to get into! There have been a dearth of stories on the site lately that fit into those categories that also appeal to me.
Review By [Coldhands] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MBB
Review:
Glad to read another Dresden-Buffy cross. There aren't that many of them. And while I can't guess the direction of the plot, the quality of your writing makes it a promising story already :-)

I was a little disappointed to having the hellmouth be revealed so early, but the use of Bob made up for that. He's a favorite of mine, and you have him down perfectly. (And I can see Murphy have many battles with him :-D )
Murphy's experience from inside Sunnydale Law enforcement is golden, too.
I'm wondering, are you planning of having Kinkaid pick up their fling?

About alternate story titles; Murph's Law springs to mind; both because TV police shows are often named after it's lead character and it's personal view of justice, and a link to Murphy's law for her luck of endign in SUnnydale. But the one you already go works just fine. (Though it implies there should be more cops, and initially made me think of Kate Lockley)

If you were to focus on Bob anythong from Bobbing Along to Spiritual Guidance could work ;-P
Review By [MBB] • Date [10 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
I can't wait for Bob's reaction when Karrin mention Buffy's name.
Comments from author:
Yes, that should be amusing.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
Very cool
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Interesting development chapter, I like the interaction between Murphy and Bob.

Great story so far!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like the Murphy and Bob dialogue. They're fun to write :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
So that's what happens when you ask for the short version and won't tell your skull ghost the name of said minor. Thanks for continuing... looking for some Au-ey goodness from the interactions.
Comments from author:
Yep. I've always liked believable misunderstandings, and this is one I plan on running with for a bit. Of course, even if she knew that Buffy was the slayer, I think that Murphy would object to a girl her age going out and playing vigilante. Expect some AU-ey goodness on the way, although we're still a little ways from any major divergences. Best Wishes :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from war
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Hope Karin is careful with the questions she asks, most of the night life really doesn't like people poking into their business.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Well, Murphy's not heading to a demon bar (yet); she's going to talk with Buffy, who is not likely to attack a police officer, so I think that Murphy should at least make it through the next chapter. Of course, if she keeps digging into Sunnydale's nightlife, then, as you say, all bets are off.

Thanks for the kind review :)
Review By [war] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
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And you've got the Halloween ep in the future here. I wonder what Murphy might dress up as. Too bad about the 2 slayers thing. Bob would likely recognize "Buffy Summers" but she hasn't mentioned the name of the witness, too bad.
Hm, other upcoming--Career Day with fake cop blasting away at Buffy & hitting Oz--Murph could easily be there, too. And the results of the test showed B. had a future in law enforcement. Heh.
I bet Giles would be dying to pump M. for info on Dresden & wizards in general-I doubt the Council has a good relationship with that group.
Comments from author:
Plenty of interesting events are on the way (I love Season 2), as you note. As for Giles, I think the one he will really want to talk to is Bob, although i would not expect that he'll find out about Bob for some time. I'm also not sure that Murphy knows that much about the Council (other than Harry and Molly).

Thanks for the kind review :)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DrDamage
Review:
Grrrrr. I've been trying to come up with a fictional, disgraces, whitehat cop to transplant to Sunnydale and Murphy NEVER ONCE OCCURED TO ME?

Oh well, you'll likely do the story better than I would anyway. (Those grapes! sour!)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, and sorry that I beat you to writing the story (well, not that sorry). All the best :)
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gideon
Review:
Well it looks like Buffy has picked up another ally, even if she doesn't know it yet. Now they just need to somehow convince each other they know about vampires without sounding like they are crazy! Giles is going to love meeting Bob but it might be a while before they trust each other enough to share info at that level. Especially if she tries to tell Buffy's Mom on her!
Comments from author:
Well, I'm not sure that Buffy will see Murphy as an ally (at least not initially), but, hopefully, they'll be able to work something out.

Thanks for the comments and suggestions :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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