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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from leb
Review:
so what happens next? I would love to see where xander takes harry, harrys training, what happens in the wizarding world, ect. please write more soon
Review By [leb] • Date [2 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
This is sadly a bit of a disappointment as I feel you could have gone SOOOOO far with this making it so much more and better. Please don't get me wrong it's an excellent first chapter but ending it here it's rather sad. If you choose to continue this I would definitely want to read more of it.
Review By [twlight] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from loretta
Review:
this is good, could you continue it or post when someone takes up the challenge
Review By [loretta] • Date [19 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Netchka
Review:
Very interesting start to this challenge. I do hope someone continues it.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rune
Review:
Nine because its a scene not a story.

The idea is good up to a point, Xander dresses as Dumbledore, keeps memories and powers, realizes Harry is being mistreated/used by Albus, rescues him.

FORGET A ROMANCE BETWEEN HARRY AND XANDER!
Those of you who must have slash please write the story of Lucius buggering Draco, its much more realistic.
Malfoy Sr. is the kind to do it and that would explain why Malfoy Jr is such a waste of flesh.

What comes next is backstory, training after the rescue, Albus and other wacked out wizards response, the beat down of said wizards, finding attacking killing Tom, dealing with the remaining DE's, purebloods, and corrupt Ministry, Willow does a spell to snap every wand on earth at some point, Hecate sends most wand wavers to the naughty corner. Harry gets married to a slayer.
Review By [Rune] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Zyanadryn
Review:
really really good start!!!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VessaMorana
Review:
Fun but feels much more like a 1st chapter than a complete oneshot.
Review By [VessaMorana] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SaiyaSith
Review:
The hell? Was a great start, but you're really gonna just leave it hanging like that??
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from teddybear
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I like it so far and it was a little disappointing to have the story state that it was finished. It leaves much to be wrapped up and I hope that you decide to add more chapters.
Review By [teddybear] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShadowKage
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That's it?! Come on, you have the potential to take this even further than you have! Are you going to write a sequel to this story? It was very well done you know.
Review By [ShadowKage] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mishaptaketwo
Review:
Interesting and intriguing, but it feels really fragmentary to me. I'll be the first to admit I find drabbles pointless and annoying, but honestly I was left at the end of this going "Huh? Where's the rest of it?"

In my opinion it would work as a first chapter, as a stand alone story...not so much.

(I would like to see more)
Review By [mishaptaketwo] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from potterinu
Review:
Complete?
Review By [potterinu] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Well that is an awesome beginning! I hope you plan to continue this story!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChaosLady
Review:
THAT'S IT?! There's no explanation of how Xander even knew about Harry Potter,let alone how to find Sirius Black? Or how he knew Dumbledore was stealing from Harry? How he got into Hogwarts without Dumbledore knowing about it? All the paintings report to him you know! And why he felt such a need to interfere? WHAT A LOUSY WAY TO END A FIC THAT HAD SUCH POTENTIAL!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from desartrattaz
Review:
good start, you are now tracked
Review By [desartrattaz] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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