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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from spartan
Review:
Please Give Xander a dose of the Serum. Vita rays wouldn't hurt either. I just hated how the guy was considered 'useless' throughout much of the show. Buffy doesn't need it as she's already the Slayer and very powerful. Willow is well on her way to becoming a very powerful witch and Oz is a werewolf learning his control over his abilities. Tara, if she does come into the picture is also going to become a very powerful witch. so that leaves Xander as pretty much the only one who needs a dose of the Serum.
Review By [spartan] • Date [5 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
Coulson sure is under-appreciated, officially that is. A well written build-up.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Niiiice! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from justapiranha
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I am liking theses little ficlets. Now if you could go into detail on some of the other projects Maggie has been involved with, and may have sabatshed. Like the Dr Banners research? Or base the Sss off a gamma monster and a hst mix with a slayer and get she-Hulk?
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [12 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from superprocrastinator
Review:
I love sneaky Fury! Nice basis for a crossover. I can see Buffy attempting to fluster Coulson and failing abysmally.
Review By [superprocrastinator] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from becuzitswrong
Review:
Excellent premise. I can see this going so many ways. Unfortunately, not many of them are good for our heroes, the Scoobies. Still, if SHIELD should become aware of the Slayer and by some odd chance decide to recruit the Slayer to do her job, it'd be more of a paycheck than she has ever had. Of course, canon Buffy isn't exactly military material, but she might fit into a secret government agency. Maybe. Snort.

Thanks for the story!
Review By [becuzitswrong] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Mcspender
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Ladies and gentlemen, Phil Coulson, professional buttkicker vs a bunch of Frankestein wannabes. This is gonna be good!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AbscondingCascade
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I feel the need to get some popcorn, As this is going to be brilliant. In thanks ~ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lsEIdlbsMnk
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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Heh. Plausible deniability, that's the ticket.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
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Nice set-up. Are you planning on expanding this to a larger story, or a series of smaller short stories?

And considering Walsh's seeming complete lack of morals, her gaining possession of the Super-Soldier serum is NOT a good idea.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written insight into the mind of Maggie Walsh.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! Walsh isn't used as the POV character very often, so I'm so glad you liked it! :)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
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It creeps me out a bit to think of Maggie Walsh (who stood for the opposite of just about everything that Erskine held dear) getting her hands on the dear doctor's notes!
Comments from author:
Right? She would have no qualms twisting Erskine's work into something he would dread.

Thank you for the review!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Senko
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Hmm interesting and I can see her being responsible for the partial serum used in the hulk movie although the process won't have pleasant results for her soldiers particularly given there would be failures before her limited success. Especially since in at least one official cartoon series failed serums gave the subjects other uncontrolled (without a special ring) super powers like super speed or flight although it did wear off eventually (years after exposure). Hmm I wonder how her soldiers would react to a gender change or growing feathers. Still I can't shake the scary thought of a proper or even upgraded serum being used on Buffy so Walsh can observe its effects on a mystical creature she thinks she can handle.

Anyway on another note its Hostile Sub Terristrial (not sure of the spelling on that last word) or HST not UST.

Hopefully you'll continue this.
Comments from author:
Yes, the serum in Walsh's hands is a scary thing, especially since we know how far she's willing to go (e.g. Adam). And if she combines it with her demon experiments? Not good.

Glad you liked this, and thank you so much for the correct. I was mixing up Buffy-verse HSTs with Criminal Minds' unsubs. *facepalm*

And I might actually have more soon...

Thank you for the review!
Review By [Senko] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kerrykhat
Review:
You already know this, but I freaking love this, akat! It's a great setup, and I love the hints of the rivalry between Maggie Walsh and Nick Fury. Of course, now I want to know how much Fury knows about the Initiative, since he is THE spy, to quote Tony Stark.

Fantastic job, akat! More, more I say!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much, kerry! Glad you like the part about Fury and Walsh knowing each other - especially since there will be more on that! And you'll get more, too, much sooner than I planned!
Review By [kerrykhat] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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