ok, prophecy bad. But really, what are the odds of something like that happening, right? Nothing to worry about! Boy will she be sorry about the things she said to Trelawny later on. They'll probably laugh about it someday. "No, really? Death was your gift?" heh.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Why do I have a feeling that Bell would have preferred detention instead of hearing this. She always has to scare her students. "LOL"
short but good.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Splintered Friendships" from bradsan
Review:
Go Bell show them. I wonder of Sev heard what Buffy euhm Bell said to the boys. I always thought that it was wrong what they did to Snape. Harry looked more like his mom than father. He never bullied anybody only defended himself when necessary.
Can't wait if you gone write some more. I like the chapters they are fun to read.
It's cool - if not a bit strange - to read a kind, considerate Peter. But he couldn't have always been a monster, right?
Comments from author:
:) I'm glad you liked it. While getting ideas and even when I'm writing these shorts I've noticed I always start out portraying Peter as a horrible person purely because of what happens later on. So I thought it would be good to give him a chapter to himself, just to remind myself and everyone else, that he wasn't always a bad guy.
Awww, she's befriended Sniv-- er, Sev. Too bad her friendship wasn't enough to keep him from turning into a DE. Then again, she disappeared before he was old enough and maybe that pushed him over the edge.
I am enjoying this story and Found. Please try to finish both. Also, I love Snape!!!! I cry every time I watch the movie or read the book in regards to him. So feel free to save him and reward him with Buffy!!!
Review By [blueyes] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Morning After" from starwolf
Review:
nice little shorts. keep up the good work. thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. Glad you are enjoying it :)
Review By [starwolf] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Not Rated