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Review of chapter "Changed" from Sdarian
Review:
Not bad. The only real issue I have with this is Xander's strength. After 7 months of dedicated working out and strength training he might have enough strength to lift and move the Dragonslayer around, but not enough to use it in battle like that. Guts was training and working out with giant swords all his life before he came across the Dragonslayer, and even then he still needed more intense training on top of what he was doing to use it like he did.

So to have Xander doing these things without keeping Guts' body... just breaks it for me.
Review By [Sdarian] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changed" from deathgeonous
Review:
And it's good!!! Really thanks for both writing this and transferring it over here, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [8 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changed" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
lets do a head count...
the nastiest bitch in SDH...the werewolf...a witch...two vampires... two super soldier who live up to the whole super thing...and me the Slayer.


We've got an army of vampires....

I'm the Slayer, I have a stake and oh yeah, I've got PMS.

ah well sounded better in my head. keep it up
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changed" from Mamodo
Review:
Love the last comment Buffy makes.
Those vamps really got the famous luck of Donald Duck, haven't they?
might have been better for them to take a dive in Holy Water.
Then again. They disturbed the movie. The Scoobies got to be thankful for that one.
I mean: there is bad and then there is Twilight. Scary!!!!
Review By [Mamodo] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changed" from Greywizard
Review:
Excellent!!! ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changed" from Toraneko
Review:
Good story, i really enjoyed it. Hope to see a sequel. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Toraneko] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changed" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful ending!
Angel/Willow works well. Buffy/Xander fits, Cordy/Oz is great - first time I have seen that one. Amy/Jonathon is a good one!

Thanks for a great story!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mall Madness" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Nicely done battle, great chapter thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mall Madness" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
awesome. nice fight and loved the tank.
now Dru is gone, whose gonna get in the way of the scoobs.

keep up the good work
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mall Madness" from Gideon
Review:
Awesome chapter. I loved it. Each scooby triumphed over their foe and then they could come together in victory. Zodd's death scene was very good, although I don't know who it was that Xander recognised when Zodd died. And Jenny tagging in for Buffy when Willow was drinking her? I didn't expect that! It is a great way to get the gang to trust her again. And with Jenny and Willow both working on it Angel will be resouled in no time!
I did notice a couple of there/their and your/you're errors though.
Comments from author:
Xander didn't recognize anything he was waiting for a reveal but Zodd was so old he faded to dust. Zodd is like the Beast from Beauty and the Beast he was such a good character to me that it doesn't matter what his face would have been it was going to be disappointing because he wouldn't be the Beast anymore.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise" from Gideon
Review:
I had to laugh at Slayer stuff coming up and distracting Buffy as she tries to come clean with Willow :) That was well done. The fact that Willow was not able to separate their scent was another good touch. It was interesting to see Willow take Buffy's place as the one who saw Angel off and the one who would miss him most. Willow being the only one who has parents who might care is funny, and cute.
I'm glad Xander told Buffy the truth about who she used to be instead of trying to hide everything. I'm glad Buffy didn't forgive him right away but did once he had explained.
Using the Judge as another way for Angel to lose his soul was a great idea. I hope Willow is not affected as badly as Buffy was. For one thing they haven't been dating as long, or at all really. Seeing that her blood is dangerous to Angel she should be able to get out of there alive, but I bet it won't be easy!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pain and Punishment" from Gideon
Review:
Poor Kendra only lasted a chapter :( I did find it amusing though that the gang busted in on a baptism :)
I also agree with Buffy that she should tell Willow about her kisses with Xander. Willow deserves to hear it straight. Bad news that Drusilla got away again and without any soldier memories will Xander be able to get hold of a rocket launcher for the next chapter?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relief" from Gideon
Review:
I like the changes that are being made here. Xander being recruited by the Initiative rather than Buffy, and a year early. Xander and Buffy being in the basement rather than Xander and Cordy. Willow actually getting some change from her costume for once. It all adds up to quite an exciting story!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relief" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very good, they know Willow didn't kill Harmony!
Interesting that the Initiative is trying to recruit Xander, I would think he would be a bit too chaotic for them - even after Halloween. I guess they just see the Demon fighter and not the rest.
So Kendra is here, this should be...interesting with the changes that have happened.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relief" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
and thus arrives Kendra. hope she doesn't try and slay Willow.
wonder how long before they learn who's out to get them.

keep up the good work
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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