Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
TikiPrincessReview:
Great job!
Your characterizations are pretty good, and I love the way you hinted at the way Buffy and Dean get along. I bet if the Scoobies tried to tell Dawn the exact same thing, she would have gotten all scream-y and angst-y. But Dean could say it from an older sibling perspective and would get through to her as someone who's outside the gang, but not quite an outsider.
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TikiPrincess] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
EnchantedFaeReview:
Cute story. I like how Dean somehow helps Dawn open up and be honest to Buffy and in turn helps her deal with her teen angst issues.
It is a good idea because I can see Dean doing that, it made sense. The personalities were well written too! You are a good writer :-D
You should check out my story, "The Hunter Chronicles" it is going to be a weekly type series. I would love to get your opinion on it, since it is a Supernatural/BtVS Crossover.
Anyways, keep up the great work!
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EnchantedFae] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
