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Review of chapter "The Sun Shines Red" from Harry
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I think that if anyone got the references that Willow was using, it was Hermione. She is the brains of the trio, and she is one who would catch on and quickly. Now, lets see how long the information seeps into the brains of the others. And I think that Snape has found a great deal of respect for Willow as well. And earning his respect is not a easy matter to do.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bedside Manners" from Harry
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I know that Willow is not up to full strength and won't be till she merges with her dark side again. But she still has her brains and her ability to analyze things. Lets hope that the talks with Dawn and Faith did some good for them.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Solstice Celebrations" from Harry
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Ron, WHY did you have to open up your yap? Remember what Hermione said about the Butterfly Effect? You may have just started that!
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dark Dealings" from Harry
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Dark Willow, Voldemort AND The First working together?!? THAT SPELLS TROUBLE! The sort of trouble that is going to cause some major repercussions throughout both the Muggle and Magical worlds.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Out of Time" from Harry
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Red, split in two and trying to usurp the First Evil? No wonder Dumbledore sent this group back in time! When you are dealing with Mojo this powerful, you NEED help from the best! And in Hogwarts case, that means the founders.
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sun Shines Red" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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I have just finished the series up to this point. While there are several points I don't like too much, you've managed to bring together a marvelous please keep writing as this is a new a very engaging story.

*Hugs&Kisses*
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [20 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sun Shines Red" from WordWizard
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Just finished reading your Rosenberg's Army series and loved it. Please say that there's more coming. The comic book geek in me loved the Superman references in the last chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [WordWizard] • Date [29 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sun Shines Red" from Obsidian
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interesting continuation of the story so far. I like it. I look forward to more. thanks.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [26 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sun Shines Red" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Cool chapter, I like the code names Willow chose!.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Sun Shines Red" from ChaosLady
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I thought I didn't like this story as much as the other one, I must have got a bad first impression somewhere, but those can be wrong. Excellent update!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind words! I'm very glad that the story appeals to you more on a second reading. I'll try to keep updating, but my Muse is a finicky little thing at the best of times.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [14 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sun Shines Red" from MistofRainbows
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Nice chapter, I'm glad to see that you updated. I'm a bit confused though... I thought that the First could only pull the trick of knowing things with people that died. It's one of the reasons that it had to only take the images of dead people... Ah... well. I can see a reason for Snape's annoyance... JUST for once in your damn worthless life shut up Weasley.
Comments from author:
I think the First only knows the thoughts and experiences of people who have died, but since it is an embodiment of a key aspect of almost every living creature, it exists in some form wherever the smallest hint of evil exists, including in the deepest recesses of the purest souls. That's my understanding, at least.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [13 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sun Shines Red" from AkashaDrake
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"KNEEL BEFORE ZOD!!!"

That is HILARIOUS coming from Snape!!!
Comments from author:
Heh. Glad I could make you laugh. ^_^
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [13 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bedside Manners" from DenSorteEngel
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PLEASE tell me that you aren't abandoning this story?? It's been great so far, maybe a bit on the short side, but still great! PLEASE continue :)
Comments from author:
I would like to finish this story some day, but not on my own. I have some ideas for how this story could go, but I do not feel that I am the best person to write them. If anyone ever has any interest in taking over the reins for this story, I would love to see this story finished, hopefully with me in an editorial role. As the lead author, however, I cannot honestly say I intend to finish this story. If anyone feels up to the task, however, I gladly welcome their input.
Review By [DenSorteEngel] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bedside Manners" from SummerK
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This whole series is great! Can't wait to read more.
Review By [SummerK] • Date [7 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bedside Manners" from MarcusSLazarus
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Resorting to time travel as a first resort to escape danger seems a BIT extreme, but splitting Willow with Toth’s weapon is definitely interesting- I’ve always liked the idea of heroes facing themselves; it’s one reason Angel’s my favourite character-, and the potential offered by the implied contrasts of magical ability between ‘She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named’ and Willow should be interesting to see more of when they return...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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