Once again, great fic. Waiting for the bit where Buffy or Xander punchers the Doctor when they find out the truth about Dawn's aging. It is not like she could hide that from, say, House.
She stood there, smiling. Smiling and completely naked.
“Hello, sweetie.”
Now, that was the perfect way to end this. Great!
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Hello, Sweetie"" from Meneldur
Review:
Oh, beautiful. Love how you write the Doctor, and everyone's interactions with him. So how does it work, exactly? The House is in the Dreaming, right? And Dawn (The Key) is connected to the TARDIS? Is the TARDIS connected to the House? In any case, it's great that The Doctor got River Song back, and I certainly hope this line "I'm pretty sure we're going to be seeing a lot more of him" will be true (though not too much, because all this techno-talk is giving me a bit of a headache, and we haven't even started to integrate it with the Dreaming and the House). In any case, a great addition to the series. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Things I will tell you:
- there is more than one Key - Dawn and the TARDIS have something in common - at this point in the story, the Doctor has already helped out Chataigne
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Hello, Sweetie"" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Very, very nice!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter ""Hello, Sweetie"" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good fix and still worked in the time line. I know you want Dawn and Xander to end up together and despite my earlier qualms this shows them developing and adult friendship which I suppose can later become an adult physical one. So good on the sub-plot of Dawn and Xander being there for each other.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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