Love this, would love to see more, but from looking over your older work you seem to prefer short one shots, sigh. Still, great story, thanks for sharing it with the rest of us!
Review By [Duquette] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
A very good taste of a story and I look forward to seeing more. The big test will be if this story can go the distance. There have been more than a handful Xander/Charmed xover stories, even a few Xander having some connection to Cole. However just about all of them end up dead after a few chapters.
I am a little worried with how short this first chapter is, less than 1k words, but if this story can go the distance it could be great.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Holy frak.... Well, if this doesn't get Jenny into the crew - and hopefully let'em know about the Kalderash, curse, etc - then she and Giles is stupider than should be allowed to live. Granted she had a whole past of being under the thumb of her tribe's elders and what not, but being on the Hellmouth, solo!, should put the kibash on any respect she might have left for them; let her be more independent and maybe she and her thing with English can survive...
It'd be funny if Charmed was like 'Wormhole Extreme', wouldn't it? Pru wrote up and sold the idea to Hollywood for both cover and money - they can't be wealthy fighting demons and such; it'd cut too far into their lives, as seen from the show. hell, they were getting by, but that's about it, even with Leo repairing the manor almost weekly...
Review By [trongod] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
