TtH • Reviews • Supergirl Returns Outtakes

Review of chapter "The New Neighbour" from (Current Donor)

Review:

The whole series for the Supergirl Returns Universe is really quite a delight. Thank you for letting us see your mash-up of realities. Nicely done.

Comments from author:

Thanks - there should be more eventually, but I want to finish other things first.

Review By [ (Current Donor)

Katrina] • Date [3 Apr 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "The New Neighbour" from Morgomir

Review:

Great chapter. Keep up the good work. (Sorry for the late review. Internship)

Comments from author:

Many thanks - good luck with the internship.

Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "The New Neighbour" from JediKnight

Review:

Very nice job on the new chapter, though I don't think it's UCLA Charlie teaches at.

Comments from author:

No, he's at a fictional university - for story purposes he visits UCLA to lecture occasionally.

Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "The New Neighbour" from RevDorothyL

Review:

Nice meet, even if the set-up didn't work for a longer story. :)

Comments from author:

Thanks, I tried it several ways, this just doesn't work as a good opening - at least not for me!

Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [31 Jan 13] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Like Zits" from WalkInEternity

Review:

Oh, this is great! I especially love the unexpected cameo from Death of the Endless. Haha and of course she would remind him of Abby!

Comments from author:

Thanks - I decided it was an unnecessary info-dump, but it's more or less canon for the series.

Review By [WalkInEternity] • Date [14 Sep 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Like Zits" from Morgomir

Review:

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Comments from author:

Thanks - hopefully the rest of the story that outtake comes from will be up sooner or later.

Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Like Zits" from JediKnight

Review:

Nice, a little funny as well.

Comments from author:

Thanks!

Review By [JediKnight] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Like Zits" from Dmitri

Review:

That was a somewhat depressing story. But it's your universe, your call, I suppose.

Comments from author:

Well, it was going to lead up to the introduction of a MAJOR problem for all of the superheroes, but on reflection I decided that if I use that plot I won't put in much foreshadowing - it'll be a sudden crisis, not a gradual thing.

Review By [Dmitri] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Speedster" from RogueAngel

Review:

Next been much of a Dextor fan sadly. But a CSI getting superpowers, why not him lol. (I shudder at the idea) please please please. I wanna read about Flash's appearance (Barry) in the Supergirl 'verse you created. Plus some Kara/Dick would be brillant!

Comments from author:

More Kara / Dick is in the pipeline. I know who the next Green Lantern will be, but haven't figured out the Flash yet, except it probably isn't Barry.

Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [25 Jul 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Speedster" from Dragonelf

Review:

More please.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Imperial Cheese Pie::

# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
# = # = # = # = # = # = #

Comments from author:

There's quite a long one, but I haven't yet decided if it's an outtake or not.

Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Speedster" from (Past Donor)

James

Review:

RODLMBO!

That was brilliant!!!

James

Comments from author:

OK, if you say so, I won't argue...

Review By [ (Past Donor)

James] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Speedster" from JediKnight

Review:

Interesting.

-Are you taking suggestions for the next one?

Comments from author:

Thanks!

No thanks for suggestions, I'm basically going to go through unfinished drafts etc. and see what's worth keeping; and I'm already working on the next story in series canon.

Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Speedster" from Arekanderu

Review:

Holy crap. Dexter with the powers of Flash!? There won't be any crime left in the world!

Comments from author:

Define crime, and remember the saying "Power corrupts; absolute power corrupts absolutely." Want to be chopped up for an overdue library book?

Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Speedster" from CrazyDan

Review:

Holy Schnikes! Nicely done.

Comments from author:

NOT canon, but fun!

Review By [CrazyDan] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Speedster" from DianeCastle

Review:

I thought that was hilarious. I've been enjoying the entire series, but that was a good one.

Comments from author:

Thanks - definitely not canon though!

Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated