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Review of chapter "Reunions and Murder" from Roth
Just read the first chapter. The story is good though the execution is a tad rough. By rough I mean it doesn't flow as well as it could. Though that could just be me and an early rising on a Saturday. Poor Buffy, not being included in the group going to the crypt. By the way who is Elizabeth, an AU sister? If you meant Buffy, Buffy's full name is Buffy Anne Summers. Buffy isn't short for Elizabeth, Her mother named her Buffy straight off. As stated on many Buffy wiki pages and by Joss in interviews.
Comments from author:
I'm taking a slight creative license with Buffy's full name. Don't worry, she'll still be called Buffy for the majority of the story, save for a couple people later in the story, and maybe Faith when she feels like bothering her. The name has significance to the story, and will be explained as time goes on, so please just stick with me.

Thanks for taking the time to read my drivel.
Review By [Roth] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conspiracy Theories" from sjyu
Ooh, maybe Lindsey will be on the Light side this time. I always thought he could have become a white hat in time. I'm a "happily ever after" after much angst type of gal. But I know it's wishful thinking.
Really like this story.
Comments from author:
Don't worry SJ, there will be plenty of angst over the course of the story. Thanks for sticking with this xD.
Review By [sjyu] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conspiracy Theories" from Wormbait
Hmm, interesting beginning, I find myself hooked and will be looking forward to seeing just what's at the crypt.

Well done and thanks for sharing, I look forward to more.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conspiracy Theories" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
There aren't many stories that intervene in Finch's death but I like the possibilities they create. You seem to have definitely opened things to a very different path that is very interesting. I'm very curious that you have Dawn before season five. Is she not the key in this story?
I look forward to seeing where you go with this but I do have one more question, who the hell is Elizabeth Summers?
Comments from author:
I'm fairly certain at some point Joss said in interview or something that Buffy's real name was Elizabeth. so uh.. there. xD

Thanks for the review, and hope you continue to enjoy.
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reunions and Murder" from Oxnate
“I’ll be sure to endeavor to air on the side of caution from now on, miss Lehane.” Did Wesley suddenly possess Finch for a minute? And where did Finch get all this info? He was just a deputy Mayor.

Also, you switch back and forth from past to present tense a lot. It makes it hard to read.

-Interesting idea though. Tracked.
Comments from author:
Finch knowing what he knew will be explained further into the story. Thanks for the track.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reunions and Murder" from sjyu
Great beginning. Love how you gave Faith friends and stopped her from killing. And how Buffy finally saw where Faith was living. I think it sets them up for a better relationship in the future.
Review By [sjyu] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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