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Iniquities of the Father

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Review of chapter "Daddy, you bastard, I'm through" from raxadian
Review:
Yes, is always about you, isn't it?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puedo escribir los versos más tristes" from raxadian
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This is very interesting.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Iniquities of the Father" from raxadian
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Well, Dawn is not quite human, but she isn't a mutant, right?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy, you bastard, I'm through" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work. Sorry for the later review (internship)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Daddy, you bastard, I'm through" from AllenPitt
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The sad thing is, he'd be overjoyed if he learned that his grand daughter had super powers, up with Sabretooth/Logan.....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy, you bastard, I'm through" from RevDorothyL
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Darn right, Joyce!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy, you bastard, I'm through" from CPTSkip
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While I liked all three parts to your story, I am left feeling very sad. I can almost forgive Erik for his terrorism because Humans treated his family and him so badly. But to turn around and hurt his family by abandoning them in turn, there is just no excuse. Well written but now I want to kick Erik's stupid butt. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Daddy, you bastard, I'm through" from CrystalBlaze
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You realize that if Buffy ever, ever discovers Erik's her grandfather and what he's done, she's gonna kill him under the pretext that he caused Joyce's fatal stroke (or even her brain cancer).
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puedo escribir los versos más tristes" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
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This is a great story. Very poignant. If you ever get a chance I'd love to read a sequel where Erik meets either Buffy or Dawn, or perhaps a one-shot where he sees Joyce, or comes to her funeral.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Puedo escribir los versos más tristes" from Morgomir
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Great idea. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Puedo escribir los versos más tristes" from dreameralways
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This is such an interesting concept. I hope you do more.
Comments from author:
I definitely want to write more in this verse. The August Fic-a-Day is coming up, and this series is one that I would love to expand upon during that time.

Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puedo escribir los versos más tristes" from RevDorothyL
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Sad verses, indeed! Very well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed, despite the sadness.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puedo escribir los versos más tristes" from AllenPitt
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There should definitely be sequels. Maybe Joyce visits him or writes to him while he's in prison? Or he finds out that he has grand daughters & thinks they might be mutants?
Comments from author:
Fortunately, the August Fic-a-Day is coming up, so there's definitely room to explore more of this verse. Joyce visiting Magneto in prison would definitely be interesting to write, although I'm not sure she would let her daughters know about it.

Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Iniquities of the Father" from RevDorothyL
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Grandpa Magneto! What an intriguing twist! Any chance of sequels?
Comments from author:
There definitely will be sequels to this! I really like the premise, and I think that there's more that can be explored here.

Glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for the review!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Iniquities of the Father" from CPTSkip
Review:
What a wonderful premise. Could there be more to Joyce's and her father's story written someday?
Comments from author:
There is more written, I just need to get around to posting it. It's an interesting verse to write in, and there's a lot to be said in it, I think.

Glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for the review!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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