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Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from Dayloc
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This story is great, and despite the time you've been absent, I'm still hoping to see more from you.
Review By [Dayloc] • Date [10 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from tavinseven
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this is a really good bleach Buffy cross I can't wait to read more. I can't help but wonder if the reason people are following his commands is because of his spiritual pressure or if it has something to do with Excalibur.
Review By [tavinseven] • Date [8 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from TDMaster
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Very good so far. I hope for more.
Review By [TDMaster] • Date [7 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from CageFire
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Interesting story. I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from TTrunks
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I like this story. It has a decent mix of humor and awesomeness. I like how you had Xander take a level but not go too far.

Also, I think if possible, you should have Xander work on some of the Star Wars light-saber styles, since they seem like they'd work good for his sword and tend to go for decapitations and blocking long range attacks. We never really see any "Sword styles" in Bleach but it could be very cool to have Xander have bits of different styles he can switch between for different enemies.

My final question is, will Xander work on Kiddo? I understand Rietsu is harder to pull up in your story, but even in the Bleach universe this was rarely done, it seems more often people used a small bit of Rietsu to do kiddo. It might be interesting.

A final thing I want to mention here. You might have Xander remember his sword can be a long or short as he wants it to be. ((Ichigo's dad mentions that most captains can control the size of their blades)) I'm not sure if it will ever come up but if Xander wants to always keep it on him he could probably do so making to knife sized.

Oh, and is "Excalibur" blade his initial form or his first release? You may clarify that in the story since it's sort of implied it's the sword's initial form.

Anyway, I really enjoyed the story so far. Please update soon :)
Review By [TTrunks] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Hmm, Xander the King interesting plot twist. He does need to control his ambition.

Great chapters!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [18 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from Genuka
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wonderful tale! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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You are improving.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You're a what now?" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Some very excellent ideas executed poorly. We should not be seeing much of the same old plotline with massive changes already introduced.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "How many references can you spot?" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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And that was pure crap.

If I wanted canon I would have watched the show. How exactly does everything happen nearly identically when the author has introduced major changes?
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death and the Zeppo" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Promising first chapter, even if I'm not a great fan of Buffy/Xander.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from eternalfox
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Considering this is season 2 and already close to the incident with the Judge and Buffy, unknowingly breaking the curse that binds Liam's soul to his body (a corpse kept in suspended decay by demonic energy). Will Xander do what Buffy could not and remove Angelus from the equation before he gets a chance to torment their lives?
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from CastorandPollux
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Excellent.
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [14 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from Questara
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Liking the story so far.
Review By [Questara] • Date [14 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Took a level in Badass" from darkk
Review:
really good!!
Review By [darkk] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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