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Review of chapter "Workout" from Chan
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Hum... intense wonders how faith is going to manage to sound the alert for TNWC she might consider just going to JC & asking if he wants more like her faster,stronger able to meet T's in hand to hand I'm thinking JC wouldn't discard any advantage irregaredless of what Sarah might think.

Maybe but someone is probably going to have to treat him as a leader at some point if it starts now John might get over his whole woe is me the human race survival depends on my leadership. funk he seems to be in at the moment
Comments from author:
John may be the future savior of mankind, but that's a ways off. I don't see Faith going to 'the kid' for advice or permission right now. Maybe later once he starts maturing, but not yet.
Review By [Chan] • Date [30 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From Russia With Love" from ShyBob
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This is awesome! Outstanding Faith characterization, good (while intentionally annoying) Sarah characterization, and hilarious Cameron interactions. Derek and Cam's foreknowledge of Faith is one of the best plot hooks I've seen for TtSCC. Convincingly (and conveniently) gets Faith integrated into the dysfunctional family dynamic.
Comments from author:
Thank You! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story so far. I confess, I am not sure if/when I'll be continuing this particular story, but I do hope to finish it at some point.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From Russia With Love" from jebbypal
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Awesome verse you've setup here. Love it
Review By [jebbypal] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From Russia With Love" from Chan
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Hummm... wonders if Cam is going to cope with the explanation if one is furthcoming about room temp angel.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, my friend. The next chapter will provide the answers you seek. ~_^
Review By [Chan] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From Russia With Love" from Arekanderu
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Angel!! Awesome. I would so love to see more of him! Is Illyria here as well? Because an Ilyria Cameron scene would probably blow my mind
Comments from author:
Heh. I imagine that Illyria will make at least one appearance here or there. The possibilities for her and Cameron together are too good to pass up. XD
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From Russia With Love" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Great they dodge the Russian Mob and let Angel know that Faith is working on her redemption.

Very good chapter!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "From Russia With Love" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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Headmaster Angel!?!? Soooo funny!

Great update and no one was killed by the Russian Mob!

DaveT.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! ^_^
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From Russia With Love" from AllenPitt
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I had the feeling you'd want to change how things went in that episode. That was one cold Cameron then. Ouch. Hm, room temperature. They're lucky Cameron didn't decide he was a Terminator.
Too bad Warren is dead, it'd be neat to have the character the same actor played, be Warren (ie the guy who got put in prison, destined to become a Skynet collaborator) .
Next up... future girl hooks up with John C., on orders from the Australian future-girl....?
Glad to see Faith availing herself of slayer/council resources. Should also give them a heads up on the details. With a little preparation a lot more of them would have survived Judgment Day & done a lot better against the machines, which might balance out the info Sk. -present is getting from Sk.-future.... --in the show that last guy from the future arrived already shot. That, to me, was a very bad sign about how the future was going.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Special Delivery" from MBB
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Rewatching SCC, so I found this update at a suitable moment.
Nice to see someone warn Sarah that it;s healty for survival to not piss everbody off and tread the terminator that is on her side with more respect. Wouldn't have expected that wisedom from Faith, but given your setting after the show it is more then reasonable that she would have picked it up somewhere, either from the Mayor's politeness or from her time in prison

Not really a JC/termanator shipper myself, but I can see Faith supporting it.
Comments from author:
Hey there! Thank you for your comments! I see Faith as being more laid back after her time in prison, and less prone to fits of temper. She still has that fire underneath, waiting to be called upon, but she knows how to choose her battles a little better now. As for the John/Cameron pairing, it is personally one of my favorites, and will likely play a role in this story. That will probably not be the only pairing, and maybe not the only one with those characters. I hope you don't think less of the story for such a pairing, but I welcome any and all constructive feedback you have regarding such a romance or anything else.

Thank you again for sharing your thoughts. Here's wishing you and yours all the very best. :-)
Review By [MBB] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Special Delivery" from Letomo
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The Hunt is the drive within Slayers that makes them go out and hunt down Vampires. Leads to, as Faith put it, the H & H's.

And, I meant more characters making appearances; like if Andrew showed up, maybe mentioned Warren, and have Cameron and maybe Derek spring to attention asking where he might be, as some of his early work also might have made it into the Terminator designs. Or Xander showing up. Or, I don't know, Angel, wondering why Faith wasn't in prison for his next visit. Anything less Terminator based, and more BtVS based.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Special Delivery" from Letomo
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OH, nice! Just found this, and I am enjoying it quite a bit. Thanks for writing it!

Will there be more BtVS crossovers? How will Faith deal with having to Hunt? Will the others find out what she does, and how will they react?

I do like that Faith gave Sarah a talking to she really needed to hear. She was really arrogant and paranoid in the first season, overly so.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story, but I'm not quite sure what you mean by 'more BtVS crossovers.' I do write other stories on this site. Also, why is 'Hunt' capitalized, and what would Faith be hunting?

Thanks again for your review. I hope you stay tuned for more of the story! ^_^
Review By [Letomo] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Special Delivery" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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I'm so glad you had Faith hit Sarah!

How dare she disrespect my favourite slayer!!!

DaveT.
Comments from author:
Heh. Yeah, Sarah can be a pushy one, can't she?
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Special Delivery" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Very good, Sarah finally pushed Faith enough that Faith pushed back, it needed to happen.
Glad to see they got Faith her weapon, bad news that it is a weapon that Faith had in the future...that means things are still on track.
Glad to hear that Adam was not a pre-terminator, bad to hear that his info could help Skynet, because there are still copies of that information running around out there.
Interesting set of Id's that will push Sarah's buttons some.

Great chapter, thanks!
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review! I'm so glad you liked the chapter. ^_^
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Special Delivery" from Chan
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Hummm... seems like sarah's a bit unbending it's good when dealing with enemies but not so good when dealing with aliies wonder if other dustup is going to happen

Scarlet Express Slayers are on alert which might mean more survive when things hit the fan.

I've gotten more curious as to how this develops.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Sarah Connor is a fairly stubborn woman. Does not always work to her advantage.
Review By [Chan] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Special Delivery" from Arekanderu
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I gotta say this chapter disappointed me a little bit. The HUGE problem with Buffy well everything crossovers is that the Scoobies especially Willow are always turned into almost Mary Sues and being able to take on anything despite the fact that objectively they should have been crushed. And that's why I liked your fic so much. So balanced Faith so perfectly in this system but now you have Willow being able to hold on Skynet by herself in the future...just ugh....I hope your not falling into the same hole so many other writers.

Still everything else is just brilliant and wonderful to read :)
Comments from author:
Oh, I know well the ease of making Willow a Mary-Sue. I fear I fell into that trap myself with some of my other fanfics. But Willow really is super-powerful in the story. However, I don't think she's going to make any prolonged appearances in this story. I won't say 'never,' but Willow isn't a central character in this story, so don't expect to see a lot of her.

Thank you for your feedback, and I am glad you are still enjoying the story. :-)
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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