I think this is a great start and I would love to see where you could take it.
Comments from author:
thanks it will probably be a slow going story. mon chevalier will be updated within the week if you are interested. ive outlined the chapter but im too lazy to type anything
Review By [mishaptaketwo] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I don't think I have seen a fic where everyone killed themselves! That is definitely a unique start. I can't wait to find out how Xander got adopted by someone that weird either.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
interesting....I actually think that Narci will make a half way decent "mom". Considering "her" desire to bare offspring, but is unable to do so, would probably make her appreciate the opportunity to adopt.
and HOW did the adoption happen btw? In the Anita verse ware's aren't exactly allowed to do a lot of things.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Not Rated
OK, this is confusing but very intriguing. I'd like to see more of where things are in the AB verse and how Xander ended up with Narcissus. With them there I have to believe Xander's hyena stuff came back, unless Narcissus just by accident adopts Xander with the intention to raise him as a loyal member of the pack (I don't remember the actual name) and turn him later on. Looking forward to more of this and Xander's proactive attitude towards this new life.
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated