Review of chapter "The Pain of Change" from
MoonFireStarReview:
two of my favorite shows ..and its centers around "Faith "I really hope this is not where you leave us hanging ...oh and "Wolf Lake " most parts are up on You tube if that helps any :D
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MoonFireStar] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Pain of Change" from
ShalaDakiriReview:
It looks like an interesting story. I've seen bits of Wolf Lake, but not enough to really know much more than there's people who shapeshift into wolves.
One thing you might want to fix, though: You keep switching between present and past tenses. It's kind of distracting.
Comments from author:
I'll try and be more aware of that last part, sorry. My penname is my excuse.
Glad you like. xD
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ShalaDakiri] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Pain of Change" from
AllenPittReview:
Which brings up...why was it removed? Meanwhile, vamp or demon of some kind is following her? Yikes. And of course she really burned her bridges in Sunnydale. Hopefully the slayer won't get sent up to Wolf Lake anytime soon.
Comments from author:
Why Faith isn't a slayer anymore will be revealed later in the story, promise.
Review By [
AllenPitt] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
SariLaneReview:
I loved Wolf Lake!!
Comments from author:
Me Too! xD
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SariLane] • Date [25 Jun 12] • Not Rated