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Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from hmhughes
Review:
Wow, just wow.

Thank you for sharing.
Review By [hmhughes] • Date [20 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Harry
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The last one, with Tony Stark, was touching, very touching. (Brushes asides tears) Truly touching when reading it.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Keshkreature
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Made me completely teary eyed!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from aiyobi
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Oh my god this story is beautiful and I loved Tonys section. I was tearing up in the end because I have been there and I thank you for writing this because it portrays so much of how we feel about cancer effecting our loved ones when they fight and when they die. thank you so much for this
Review By [aiyobi] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Inoeth
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I would absolutely LOVE to see the west wing version of this played out in a full length fic. There are far too few west wing buffy crossovers
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Callista
Review:
Great story, especially the last one. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Callista] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Runewolf
Review:
Beautiful.

All the crossovers were well portrayed.

The fact that you put the last one last was also very well thought out. Had you placed it elsewhere in your structure, it wouldn't have been as emotionally gripping. I think that Stark was a perfect choice for the last segment.

Well written.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from serenityselena
Review:
great story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from breve
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now that i've finished wiping the tears away, i can review.
heartbreaking there at the end.
lovely story.
Review By [breve] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
Review:
Alright, I'm not feeling to manly right now, but I don't care. That was a hilarious, awkward, fun story that completely broke my heart at the end. Bravo. That was one of the best fanfictions I've read on this site.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from (Recent Donor)jedibuttercup
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I'd have liked to see more of the SG-1 and White Collar ones, but it was the Avengers one that made me cry. Well done.
Review By [(Recent Donor)jedibuttercup] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from Jerri
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You made me laugh and cry. Beautifully written and your personifications were very good. Well done.
Review By [Jerri] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from KeriMcVean
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Wow, that was an incredible story. Some of the x-overs were with series I haven't seen, but they were still touching. The best one is the Tony Stark one. Beautiful.
Review By [KeriMcVean] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Wow!!! That was a fantastic mixture of funny sweet and sad .
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternal Pentagon" from SaiyaSith
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Oh My God! The early parts of the story were amusing, in a cross-over sort of way, and well written. But the bit with Tony Stark just blew the rest of the story out of the water. It was AMAZING. You should just put that bit in a story by itself, billed as an IronMan/Avengers x-ver, because I know many of the Avengers/IM fans would want to read it. You brought out something that tends to get ignored in portrayals of Stark...that bit of him that came back from the middle east a changed man. The imagery at the end was enough to almost make me cry, and I don't cry about stories! Fantastic job! And please, do consider giving the coda it's own place here as a stand-alone. It was incredible. Well done!
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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