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Ship of the Line: Sovereign

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Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from Doraemax
Review:
Huh...i just read this.

First of all, i am sorry to hear you discontinue this story. The "YAHF: Ship of the Line" challenge has spawned numerous interesting story, this one among them. And yours is really promising.

I know this is kinda too late... but i really like the way Xander Picard respond to Jack. I liked that he challenged the US and A's right and arrogance to wage an intergalactic war bearing Earth's name without the consent from Earth's other countries. And Daniel's response about the Supernatural... totally reasonable.

Wait, Jennifer Hailey? aren't she the mini-Carter? Another hawking-level genius from the air-force academy with an attitude? hehe
Review By [Doraemax] • Date [20 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from (Current Donor)KColl
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Brilliant amazing chapter that wonderfully points out the hypocrisy of the SGC and the US government. As a Brit, I first began to be irritated with SG-1 (the program not the wonderful team), when they decided to start a war that could have led to the entire world being enslaved. When the SGC got involved with the Goa'uld, yes only US lives were in danger on missions, but what would have happened if the Goa'uld came here? Would they have taken just US lives then?

And yet the US government in their arrogance decided to unilaterally fight a war. And what about all the top scientists, engineers, archaeologists, and soldiers they could have recruited from the UK, Australia, Canada, France (I suppose), Germany, Italy, India, Japan and China?


Great. Well done. Nice to hear something different than 'my country right or wrong'.
Review By [(Current Donor)KColl] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from Edman
Review:
Good story
Sad that is discontinued.
Review By [Edman] • Date [18 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from Malu
Review:
There is nothing really wrong with this story. I like all chapters so far and I don't see why there should be a problem. It is possible that someone doesn't like the choices you have made for the storyline, but that should have nothing to do with the quality of the story and is just personal preference. If people don't like it they can choose to no longer follow and that should be it. Personally I would be very happy if you could find the inspiration to continue.
Review By [Malu] • Date [27 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from imortis
Review:
its sad that a bunch of jerkoffs would make you give up on this story, I liked it a great deal and had hopes that it would continue, oh well.
Review By [imortis] • Date [6 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from Kumayasha
Review:
Wanna say off the bat that I in no way wish to push you to work on this, just want to say 2 things and ask a question.

#1 I loved all 3 chapters. I see nothing wrong with chapters 1, 2 or 3. On top of that just want to say I especially like buffy fics that break into the canon and change all the rules lol.

#2 You gave Hailey (SG1 verse i presume?) Kara's powers and enhanced brain..... Her head was big enough before but now?.... I don't think the planet is big enough for her lol.

#3 The Question: What of Buffy and Willows Halloween night? anything different happen there? (beyond everyone else being AWOL that is.)
Review By [Kumayasha] • Date [5 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Orbital Anomaly" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
while I was sad to see that you chose to discontinue this story I look forward to seeing what your new Ship of the line story is going to be like. please keep bringing us the great stories and updates, I especially hope to see Rise of the Ultimates continued in the not too distant future.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [23 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Orbital Anomaly" from (Past Donor)ridert
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love your works this one and rise of the Ultimates are my favorites I hope that the have not been abandoned and that you find your muse sometime soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from Oddshot
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Ship of the Line: Sovereign by Zaion , Why no updates for this interesting BtVS / Star Trek story you developed to answer your own Challenge .

Because you made so good of a start with what you wrote so far please some more soon ??, If required bribe your muse with some cookies OK .
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [18 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from starwolf
Review:
you have a very interesting concept going here. I hope to see you add more to it. Xander did come off as a little pompous but so does picard a lot of the time. if your going to rewrite this chapter one thing you might want to consider. when Troi went for promotion to Commander she had to get command qualified in engineering and bridge systems. when she had troubles she conferred with Beverly. so as far as command qualified and trained personnel it would go, Xander, Giles, Jonno, Dawn, Troi then Oz and Cordie.
keep up the great work, thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from AkashaDrake
Review:
I would like to remind the author of one episode where Picard got given the memories of an entire second lifetime. So Xander would have over a hundred years of life outside of the US. 50 as Picard, and at least 80 as a member of a people who were from a unified planet.
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [15 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from wolfshell
Review:
Is there going to be more of this one? So far I like most of the stories that are responding to this challenge, and thus one is a good start.
Review By [wolfshell] • Date [12 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from EKerr
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I am wondering since your challenge has taken off if you plan to update soon. I think it is a great story and hope there is more to come.
Review By [EKerr] • Date [5 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from RedDeathLV
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I don't see why anyone would have a problem with thus chapter... You're absolutely right. Hell, when I first watched SG-1 I wanted someone to say much of what Xander said to the cast so badly it hurt.

I say run with what you've got. It's excellent. I hope you pick this story up again someday.
Review By [RedDeathLV] • Date [5 Mar 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Captain Picard" from Darkstrider
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Well I don't know why so many people flamed the chapter, to be honest. It's a rational and understandable reaction to finding out that a secret project illegally declared a galaxy-wide war on an enemy with superior armament! Incredible story so far and I sincerely hope that you continue it!
Review By [Darkstrider] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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