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Review of chapter "#78 - Due Date" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
This was just supposed to be a short drabble. Argh!

---Nope. Perfect length :) Really cute fic!

PS: I'm SO GLAD that someone on this site is writing a Korra fic! :D
Comments from author:
Thanks. I always worry about the length, because sometimes, a short drabble should remain a short drabble, and other times it just keeps going and going and going and takes on a life and story all its own.

Yea! I was so sad because I saw that they didn't have a category for it, which I assume means either no-one or not enough people have been writing it, and had to upload this here instead of just on my FF.net and DeviantArt.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "#90 - Protect" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
with an entire world to protect, but she knows that she will always be able to count on Mako to protect what matters most to the both of them.

---zomg so cute!
Comments from author:
I know! The fluff and cuteness in this one killed me. I was dying of feels by the end of writing it...
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "#55 - Drunk" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
This was fun! And not to long at all - it was perfect (also, I prefer longer stories). I think you captured them very well. I'm a big Avatar fan, incl Korra, and enjoyed reading this :)

(although honestly I'm not a big MaKorra fan - it just always felt forced to me)
Comments from author:
Thanks! Somehow, my writing usually almost always seems to get away from me.

Does it seem forced because of the shortness of the series, or because Mako acts like a jerk half the time? because both can be explained.
a) they had to tie up loose ends in 12 eps 'cause they were unsure if they were getting a 2nd season at the time it was written.
b) mako is a hormonal 18-year-old boy. 'nuff said.

Not trying to bash. Just trying to understand.
I myself will admit to multi-shipping. (Tahnorra-because of the hair; Borra-because of the sweetness!)

Makorra is just my favorite because they have such contradicting personalities and when you consider it, Mako is a firebender with the personality of a water or airbender (he's rational and doesn't rely on his emotions) and Korra is a waterbender with the personality of a firebender(fuse-short).

And wow this comment got really long...
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "#92 - Confession" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Have been reading these. Nice assembly of fics. Their kid sounds cute, good use of Bolin. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad that you've been enjoying them!
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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